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Love trap - part xiii

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  1. VIJAYALAKSHMI06

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    The original author of this story is Vignesh1310 Henceforth he will be continuing the story of Love Trap.

    LOVE TRAP - PART XIII














    How could they know that chocolate would play a major role in my love……!!!!

    “Hi dude” Kumar came home in the evening.
    “Hi da… How was the class today??” I asked him.
    “Who knows?” I replied.
    “Why… You weren’t in the class???” I asked.
    “I was… But today fully core subjects… maths, physics and chemistry classes back to back…. felt bored… So slept…” he said casually.
    “Hmmm” I gave a sigh.
    “Today’s notes da… Got it from Krishna…” he gave me the notes.

    “Hey… Forget to tell you… Pooja asked for you today” he said.
    “What???” I went on cloud nine.
    “Yeah… Yeah… She looked so happy in the class… I think she searched for you to make a proposal to you buddy” he told.
    “Is it???” I asked in a josh and my mouth went open.
    “Yeah… Hereafter daily evening you would get two kisses I guess… jolly huh??? When is the treat machi???” kumar asked.
    “Hmmmmm????” my eyeball almost came out in excitement.

    I went into instant dreams.My brain started imagining. No one was there in my class except me and Pooja.We both were in color dress.She was in the same dress which she wore on that Saturday coaching class.I was writing something.Pooja came to my place.She called me in a husky voice.

    Pooja: Karthick!
    Me: Yeah
    I raised my head and answered in a dull tone.
    Pooja: Do you like my dress and hair style?
    Me: Why are you asking me???
    Pooja: Because I wore it only for you. Am I looking nice in this dress Karthick?
    Me: If I say anything then you would yell at me?? Better let me keep my mouth shut!
    Pooja: Sorry
    (Her face got shrunk in disappointment)
    Me: What for?
    Pooja: For shouting at you on that day!
    Me: No problem… I am use to it.
    Pooja: But I felt bad.
    Me: I am nothing to you Pooja… Then what’s the need for feeling bad?
    Pooja: Please… don’t say like that…
    Me: That’s the fact!
    Pooja: No… it’s not!!!
    (She looked down without facing me!)
    Me: Then?
    Pooja: You mean a lot to me… More than a friend!
    Me: Is it??? I thought I am an unwanted **** for you!!
    Pooja: Why you are talking like this?
    Me: That’s how you treated me Pooja
    Pooja: I didn’t do anything to hurt you Karthick.
    Me: Whatever… I won’t disturb you hereafter!!!
    (I stood from my place and was about to leave the class)
    Pooja: Karthick!!
    (She held my hands. I was shocked!)
    (She looked deeply into my eyes)
    Me: Let me go Pooja!
    (I avoided meeting her eyes)
    (She kept her hands on my cheeks… I started melting)
    (This time I couldn’t avoid her mesmerizing eyes… When we met into each other’s eyes… That’s it… I lost my control. I held her waist, pulled her towards me and hugged her)
    Pooja: I love you… You won my heart!!!
    (She whispered into my eyes and gave a kiss on my cheeks)
    Me: Yeah… You too!!!!!!
    (I smiled at her)

    Someone shook me.
    “Dai……!!!!!!!!!!!” Kumar shouted into my ears.
    “Hey…. you spoiled a beautiful dream machi!!!!” I said in anger.
    “Dai… People use to dream only in sleep da… How come you alone get dreams when you are awake????” he asked.
    “That’s love machi……!” I giggled.
    “Only god has to save you” he left the home by telling that.

    After dinner I went to Hasini’s room.
    She was playing with her big teddy bear.

    “Hi dear” I said.
    “Don’t talk to me. I am angry on you” she turned her face against me.
    I took two big dairy milk chocolates from my pocket.
    “Look here……….!!!” I told her.
    “Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww” she had widen her eyes and opened her mouth.
    “It’s for you alone… ok??” I told her.
    “So sweet brother…” she hugged me and kissed on my cheeks.
    “Dear…. Have you done your home work or should I help you???” I asked her slowly.
    She gazed at me for a while and asked “What should I do for you???”
    I thought she is so sharper than me and felt proud about her intelligence.

    “Hmmm… Nothing…?” I told with bit hesitation.
    “Now why you are dancing like this… Tell the matter first…. I am having lot of work… Want to watch cartoon network” she said.
    “Hmmm…. It’s my time” I thought.
    “Pooja gave you a chocolate na…..” I started the topic slowly.
    “Hmmmm……. you plucked it from me and ate na… Then what?????” she said in false anger.
    “That’s what… Tomorrow you should tell her that I grabbed the chocolate from you forcibly and ate it without giving to you!!!” I said slowly.
    She stared at me.

    “What???” I asked softly.
    “Why should I tell her???” she asked by raising her eye brows.
    I scolded mom inside my heart for providing Hasini quality nutrition and making her so sharp minded.
    At times I really couldn’t answer her questions.
    “Don’t ask questions… If you do whatever I am telling you, I will get you one big dairy milk chocolate daily…” I attacked her weak point.
    “Is it?????? Promise????” she stretched her right hand’s palm towards me.
    “Promise.!!!” I promised her.
    “Hmmm… Then…. Ok… done…..!!!” she showed her thumps up and winked her eyes.

    Next day in school.

    It was break time.As usual I spent my time by admiring Pooja.Thought she would come and talk to me. But she didn’t.
    So I tried to initiate the conversation. Went near to her place. She was with her friends… Playing something.

    “Hi Pooja” I said with a smile.
    She looked at me blankly.
    “Kumar told Yesterday you asked for me??? I didn’t come yesterday, hmmm… slight fever”
    I told by thinking that she would ask about my health. But she didn’t.
    “Yeah… Last day we had class toppers meeting with Sangunthala mam… She asked for you… That’s why looked for you” she said in a plain tone.
    “That’s all??? Nothing else???” I asked again by hoping that she would say something extra.
    “Yeah… that’s all” she said and continued talking with her friends.
    “Hmmm…. It would been better I hadn’t talkedto her instead of talking like this… How stubborn and arrogant you are???” I thought to myself and came back to my place.

    Kumar gave me a teasing look.
    “What dude… Success huh???? Hmmmm…. Hereafter we can see lot of romance around here… Isnt it????” he said in a kidding tone.
    I lost my temper and started beating him with maths book on his back.
    “Hey… hey… Paining machi… wait…. Wait…. Wait da….” He said.
    “Why the hell you said like that da???? Cha… I imagined a lot… But everything went in vein… All because of you…” I beat him again.
    “Dai…. Enough da… If you wanna beat me then beat with Tamil book… Don’t insult me by beating with a book which I hate to the core” he said.
    I stared at him.
    “Be cool dude… I said I think she would propose you… It’s just my guess… Relax…. Atleast you had a sweet dream because of me na???” he looked at me.
    “Thu…….” I spat on his face.
    “Hmmmm…. Better tag me with a sign board naming “Dust Bin… Spit here” …. Everyday someone spitting on my face and spoiling my glamour…. ****” he said seriously.
    Without listening to him, I started walking out of the class in disappointment.
    But deep inside my heart I believed that one day my dream would come true!!!

    I was lying in bed at night.
    My mind circulated around Pooja. Thought about that day where I scolded her badly.
    “Forget her Karthick” My mind told me.
    “Why should I????” I asked.
    “Because she does not love you… Not even liking you” my mind told.
    “Three years back even I didn’t like her… But now I am dying for her… The same will happen with her too… She will understand me one day” I said.
    “No…. she won’t understand…. You are not making any moves to make her realize your love on her…” my mind told.
    “What you want me to do… should I go in front of her and beg her telling I love you so much…please love me back huh???” I said in an irritated tone.
    “First get a good name from her… Make her feel comfortable with you… Then things will fall in place Karthick” my mind told me.
    “Hmmmm… ” I gave a deep sigh.
    I don’t know when I slept that night.

    Got up early next morning and started to school earlier that day.
    “Hey… Take Hasini along with you to school Karthick???” my mom shouted.
    “No mom… ask dad to drop her in bike… I am having some work” I said and started walking.
    “Hey… wait for 15 mins da… she will get ready then….” Mom told.
    “No mom… sorry…!!!” I left my home.

    I had reached school.None had come to our class.I looked outside. There was no sign of my classmates or staffs.I went near blackboard… I took chalk and duster. Thought of playing Flames, hoping that it would determine my relationship with Pooja. So wrote full name of Pooja and mine on the board.

    “Pooja Ramkumar”
    “Karthick Krishnakumar”

    I had cancelled all the common alphabets between our names… Got 16 letters as remainder.
    Then wrote FLAMES on the board.
    Started counting from F . . .

    To Be Continued . . .
     
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  2. rakinya

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    Hey Viji,

    So you are back from your internal exams? So, how did the FLAMES end? Waiting.
     
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    Yeah Rakinya. Pooohhhhhhhhhh! Completed my first internals!!Free now deariee.FLAMES, hope to turn out well???
     
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    Hi Vijayalakshmi,

    Thats great you had turned out after a long break.
    FLAMES thats cool, it was one of the famous game, everyone would have played it during our college days.
    Hope Chocolate is turning out to be playing a lead role now.
    Waiting for the solution of the FLAMES.
     
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    Thanks Ashwin for ur FB.Yeah FLAMES an awesome and thrilling game nah to know the solution.Y not yu try out, coz you hve the full complete names of both the hero and heroine. Choci mi8 play a dual role too!! Lets c.Will keep you posted.
     
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    Oops the story ended at flames....i am sure we all've done it hundreds of times...no not just for us but for our friends too.Qucik what did it end in???

    Story is going great guns!!! :thumbsup:
     
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    Thanks Dinny dear for your FB.Yea i had done it ample of tym for my friends, that used to be grt fun.Lets wait dearie.Will keep you posted.
     
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    Great going Viji, it is flaming up the interest...[​IMG]
     
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    Thanks Arunarc.Will keep posted.
     
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    Hi Viji,

    Good going with memories of FLAMES coming on our mind. Am sure everyone here would have played this for any number of times :)
     
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