Another Love Story For You, This Time With A Happy Ending!

Dear Mindian,
Stopping the story at the right time is a very powerful technique. It is not done just to sustain the listener's interest, not to show that the story teller has powers over the listener, not at all. It is just to make sure that the story soaks into the mind of the reader, goes to great depths, that it becomes part of her being.
Please don't feel bad about it, Mindi, I am posting the next part today.

You are right in choosing the classical actors MGR-Saroja Devi or Shivaji-Padmini. Padmini will be more suitable than the other lady because her beauty is of the classical type.

Don't worry, Mindi. The story has a very happy ending. Stay tuned.
Cynicism might at times correct you if you are in the wrong course.But love is the primal driving force. Without love the world will come to a standstill and cynicism would not have anything to correct.

love,

Thanks, dear sowpar.

Originally Posted by sowparnika

dear sridhar sir,
You are an expert in சுருங்கச் சொல்லி விளங்க வைத்தல் !
you are right, there should be no question of counting when it comes to God...what a nice example you have chosen.... :)

Originally Posted by sundarusha

Dear Sridhar sir,

I totally agree with you on this:

God has to be in our bedroom, in our toilet, in our study and in our reception. When I first studied Gita I took the book to my bedroom. Unless Gita comes out of our Puja rooms, it will not have any relevance for us.

I don't think God is to be confined to the puja room like a sick patient in his room. We have to be pleased that the person refrained from using vulgar words at least in one place.

Thanks, Usha. Of course from the social point of view, we have to be pleased with the person who at least did not use vulgar words in one place. But the problem is that the vulgarity will remain with him and even be reinforced by this. There is no way he can shed the vulgarity off his being. Suppose he were to assume that the entire world we live in is one large puja room for him! What will he do! That's something which is difficult for us to visulaise. But if we do, we are closer to loving God.

Originally Posted by Vidya Arun

Dear Sridhar

I kept on clicking the REFRESH button to see if more is coming. What a touching story and an excellent narration.I had a LOVE marriage and hence i was completely in tune with the hero and heroine and i was in my rewind mode.....10years before!!! It was really relaxing to read this story on a friday afternoon after working almost 12-13hrs for the last 2 months at work that i did'nt have time for even opening my IE.

I am in complete consensus with you with regards to the prayers and rituals we make in front of our ammachi. True most times since we know the person we are talking to is an embodiment of love, we tend to pour all our tensions on the almighty to ease our heaviness in the heart. I should probably learn to not do that..

Well really waiting for the continuation..We have a long holiday so i am sure i will have all the time to read the rest and post you my thoughts.

Thanks Sridhar!!

regards
Vidya

Dear Vidya,

I can now be reasonably proud that my writings were able to relax the real hardworker in you. It is unthinkable for me to work for 12, 13 hours at a stretch. I work only for 8 to 9 hours, for 5 days and take quite a lot of breaks in between. I am also happy that the story made you remember your days of love and courtship.

Of course we can pour our tensions to him. When we are hurt we can go crying to him. We can even ask for favours - psychologists say that it works as an auto-suggestion and your mind gets the power it requires during a crisis. But apart from all these things we should at some point of time melt thinking of Her love for us. We have let HER down a million times. She hasn't done that even once. Even now She is waiting for us to come to her hands; while we are out seeking something frivolous. She never minds our trespasses and with ever violation of ours, with every excess of ours, Her love for us only goes on increasing. We should have sometime in our lives to think of this supreme kind of love.




Thanks for the nice fb, Vidya.
love,

Dear Varloo,
There's absolutely no problem about the delay. And thanks a ton for those kind words you have for my narration.
In all probability I'll be posting the next part later in the day, today. Eagerly waiting for your fb for that also.
regards,

Originally Posted by Varloo

Dear Sridhar,
I read the story yesterday itself, but due to power failure could not reply.
As you have said, I too have read this somewhere. But just knowing something does not mean that I can tell that in such interesting way. Because, the success of the story in the way it is told.
Now waiting for the remaining part eagerly.

Dear Geeth,
thanks. Yes, I'll be writing about the Acharya too.This love-story is just a prelude to write about that man - the very embodiment of the purest form of love. In a few hours from now, I'll be posting the next episode. Stay tuned,Geeth.
regards,

Originally Posted by geeth

Dear varalotty sir,
wow a good start!...i enjoyed reading through and now anxiously waitig for your next part. started as a love story..but now Ramanujacharya The Great has been introduced...my guess is the story is happening during HIS period and so i am sure you will be writing about Acharya too...i am restless now to know how the link is going to take place...by the way my most favourite acharya is Ramanuja, The Great!

regards
geeth

Originally Posted by madhumathi1974

Hi bf,

I have a request sir, iam going through all the comments and ur answers which u r giving in tamil or some other language, but sir people like me connot understand that so i request u to make a translation of that sentences either in english, hindi or if u know telugu. so that will help us to understand and follow u easily.and eargly waiting for the remaining part of the story.

Hi GF,
I think you are talking about the tamil song I quoted to Usha. And here is the translation.
The lovers are drunken with love for each other. In that state the heroine sings, we'll go on kissing, even if all the numbers are exhausted.
To which the hero gives a very poignant reply, 'If you count while you kiss, that'll not be a real kiss'
The same thing applies to God. If we go around his temple 12 times, or throw flowers at him 108 times, or repeat his name 1008 times, we will be more keen on counting than on the act itself.
I'll also start a thread on this particular aspect - counting and its effects. You see basically my job is to count - that's why I am called a bean-counter or an acccountant.
love,

Originally Posted by geeth

Dear varalotty sir,
your story in the ananadavikatan Fm mum mobile phonum was really good. as i read through i did not even suspect that kind of an end! hidden suspense! unexpected end! but it was good! nice work sir.!

regards
geeth

Thanks Geeth. I have opened a separate thread for that. http://www.indusladies.com/forums/va...a-vikatan.html
You can also see there the views of other ILites.

regards,

Dear sridhar,
Never knew that you could be so cruel.And then what happened?This is no way to continue.Please tell us,what happened?
mythili

My Dear GFs,

Sorry for keeping you waiting for so long! Here's the next part of the episode interestingly entitled,

"Is There Anything More Beautiful Than My Wife's Eyes?"


Please do read it and let me know your feelings.

love,