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Old 28th May 2008, 01:29 AM
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Dear Varloo,
Thanks for the Ada paavi once again. You are right such love triangles and illicit relationships always end in a tragedy in real life. This kind of double-crossing was first experimented in writing by Roald Dhal. His story was an inspiration to me.
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But in the end, it seems that they both deserve what happened to each other.
That was a beautiful summing up,Varloo.
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Dear Sridhar,
ADA PAAVI. Well, may be you are reading the dailies in Vernacular very regularly, we get to read such real life stories which end in tragedy.
Now coming to the story, it is really fast paced, I was wondering how a lady could conceal such a fact.Hubby would have thought that she would be busy shopping in the areas he suggested and had carried on his own on the sly. But in the end, it seems that they both deserve what happened to each other. And also it seems that she was busy finding excuses to feel him and he fooled her like anything.
Wonderful story!
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Old 28th May 2008, 04:48 AM
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Dear Sudha,

Thanks again for Ada paavi. The story-line is pretty old. It is embedded in our proverb, thirudanukku thel kottina maathiri. Only the field is new.
When we think of technology we think of computers, fm radios and cell phones (soon all the three will be available in a single toy).We should also stop to think of the confusions they create, the moral depravity they may facilitate and the relationship problems they may enable.

Happy that you liked the story

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Ha ha ha......really ADA PAAVI thaan......
Good story and concept and very easy flow....and so modern....i could relate to the FM and cell phone and the easy banter between colleagues etc. Good one! Still smiling, imagining the faces of these two, plotting so much to get the cell phone home!
Thanks for posting here, otherwise would have missed a good one!
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Old 28th May 2008, 04:53 AM
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hello sathya,

thanks for making me think about the additional twist in the story. In fact my Dad was so carried away by the story that he wanted to add, "Suganthi is after all,Vaasu's own sister."


I bow down to your firm principle of not encouraging stories involving an illicit relationship. I too am not for it. But as a writer I cannot ignore the harsh realities.

When I started to write I had a twin-fold objective - to awaken the feelings of love for fellow creatures - manitha neyam and two to understand the workings of the human mind.This story falls into the second category.

thanks for the fb, sathya.
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hello sridhar...


ungal kathai yee...
pakkathai thiruppi paarkavillayo...
paarkavillayendraal itho...


ippa paaru vedikkaya thanakke pesikkondaan vasu... malathi thinamum enge poranu theriyamala enakkum... therinthu thaane vitten...sari sari nammaye sutri vara varaikkum sarithaannu,,,,cell vaangave ippadi yosanai pannal...ava velaikku povathu therintha enakku eppadi idea thonum athane... koduthen mugavari....varattum veettukku cella chellama order panra?

sathya

(irandai iruppathu
rasikka thoninum
intha rendu pondatti
rendu aathukaarar kathaigal
enakku pidikkathavai...
usual thane....
irandai ookkam kodukka
manam varavillai
thiruppam eppedi venalum
irukka
ippadiyum irukkattume endruthaan...)


sathya
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Dear Aishwarya,
Thanks a ton for the ADA PAAVI. And thanks for the nice words. I am very happy to see that you liked the story.
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Dear Sridhar,
My expression was also ADA PAAVI.....The story was well narrated. I can visualise the scenes.I read the story in one go without a wink.
Great going! Congrats!
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Veedu vitta office
office vitta veedunnu
romba samatha irukkaravanga kitta than
romba jagrathaiya irukkanum.
adhu sari 'jilpans' thamizh vaarthaiya?
thamil dictionaryla paathen kaanome?
thanks Jaya.

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Veedi vitta office
Office vitta veedu
Idula chinna veedu vera!
Ore 'jilpans' daan ponga!
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Old 28th May 2008, 05:02 AM
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Dear Lalitha,
I can lift my collars in pride that I have a bangalooru ponnu to read Tamil. And these days you don't express any difficulty in reading Tamil. When you come here in August, I'll give you a lot of my Tamil books, so that you will become fluent in reading Tamil.
And before I forget thanks a lot for Ada Paavi.
Ladies can keep so many things secret. There are ladies who keep fully blown affairs as secrets. But don't ask me how to. I don't want to earn your husband's enmity.
There was a condition of mutual mistrust and as Varloo said each deserved the other.
And Vaasu wants to have a cake, eat it too and then want one more. How is it?
thanks for the fb, lalitha.
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Old 28th May 2008, 05:23 AM
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Dear Sir
Anantha Vikatan patrikaiyil paditthen. The illustration shows some blood splash and i thought some murder mystery. But you have written bigger mystery ! Mystery of human nature. Who to believe who not to believe.No bad habits, gives wife money to spend thaaraalama, veedu vitta office, office vitta veedu, intha poonaiyum paal kudikkumaa ? Then, BANG !

Ippadi oru climax ethirpaarkavillai ! Paavi manushan utthama purushanaa vesham kattikittu, kadasiyiley kaattittaanya velaiyai !.....this is why he said wife should not go to job ? Paambin kaal pambu ariyumaam ! thaan petra "jilpaans- inbam" penjathi petru vida koodathunnu appadi oru ushaar pola !
But after reading story i became very . enga veetiley kooda avanga veedu-vitta-office type poochi thaanga. Ana, silappo overtime seiyyararu ........seivathaha solraarungo ! ayyoda !
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hello sridhar

i also thought of adding
what your dad said
(he is a great mind reader?)
but then who wouldnt
remember sils name?
a friends name would have been fine
or better still her sisters name...!!!


and is malathy and vasu
the only names
i find one more story
in kalki
with the same pair of names
aahaha

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Jilpans onnum thamizh vaarthai illa!
I think, it is one of 'thengai Srinvasan's' slang!
'udans', 'jalsa' maadiri!

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Veedu vitta office
office vitta veedunnu
romba samatha irukkaravanga kitta than
romba jagrathaiya irukkanum.
adhu sari 'jilpans' thamizh vaarthaiya?
thamil dictionaryla paathen kaanome?
thanks Jaya.
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Old 29th May 2008, 10:20 AM
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Dear Sridhar,

I think cell phone already has a built in computer and fm and here also a mobile tv with the german channels! Not to mention the camera and video....finally the phone is not only for talking.......he he!
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