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| Dear Sridhar, Raghavan went up the escalator to become Ramkumar ? No staircase or lift for him like ordinary mortals , I suppose ! The tempo is totally changed now. I enjoyed your " namma ooru nakkal & naiyandi". the two lines: Bollywood did not gladly suffer persons from outside and He scratched his head for a while and very soon a bulb flashed in his head. reveal that ! Oh, the second wife is already creating a suspense ! You just " touch & Go" - to increase our tension. Well, choicelessly we wait for next Sat ( or will it be Fri again? ) Love & regards, Chithra. |
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| HI Varalotti, Episode was truly touching...felt bad for Vidhya, shes been swallowed by the whole lot of pseudos...hope her life with Raghavan resumes to normalcy.... Nice and moving... Purni |
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| ..is the word that comes to my mind on reading this week's episode. Give or take some twists and turns in the story line, I feel I have an idea of what's to come. ( Also, thanks to your generous tips which give enough ideas to us!) But it is your writing style that impresses me most this time round. No unnecessary dilly dallying and long narratives. The story simply moves forward like a sleek merc(edes) sports! Raghavan may have escalated to MalabarHills, but looks like his crashing down is going to be very painful. Hmm... Till next week Sridhar saar... L, Kamla |
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| Sridhar, I am following your new serial, but couldn't gush out my comments to you like the mainstream,owing to other pressures; Thought i would bide my time till the suspense cleared, but you,with your forceful personality, dragged me out of my cocoon! Congratulations sridhar, an entirely different subject with real movie-suspense! Your pen has a natural grip over style-words! I have replied you ,did you notice?Re My 'Middle'? And I have produced the orginal ending also, did u read it? How do you like it? By the way, where have you inserted my 'Middle'? Couldn't find it! Last edited by nuggehallipankaja; 29th July 2006 at 09:38 AM. |
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| Dear varlotti, Your story is moving at a fantastic pace. everybody knows only the star and the fame. You are bringing to light the uncertainty and tension for the partner. the price for limelight is someoutsider decides the fate of your life.I hope the film crazy youngsters take cue, Regards, Meenu Last edited by meenu; 29th July 2006 at 01:20 PM. |
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| Dear Sridhar, Now the story is on the fast track. As you have said, many husbands do not see the pain and sorrow in the eyes of their wives, more or people like Raghavan who are very selfish. They will think that all good things happened because of them and only them. It is only natural. Poor Vidya, Raghavan had already floated away from her, only she has not realised it. Anyway, awaiting the next episode with eagerness. With war wishes, varloo |
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| Hello Sridhar, There’s a saying, Youth is a Blunder; Manhood a Struggle & Old Age a Regret. Looks like Ram Kumar has passed the first two stages already & very soon going to approach the last stage too. Maybe it applies to Vidya toooo. Its time for Vidya (maybe late) to wake up; is it the love for her husband OR the conservative thinking that’s blindfolded her??????? Its unfortunate that Ramkumar’s film entry had to do with his FILs financing while Vidya not wanting the same had to sacrifice her happiness. Maybe Ramnath wouldn’t have yielded to his Daughter’s request – sometimes ego leads to complete destruction in relationships and that’s the time wolves like Chandar sneak in and take full advantage of the situation. REGRET is all that is left at the end. Fantastic narration, Sridhar. I do appreciate the smooth & fast pace inspite of humps & bumps (twists & turns). Just can’t wait to see the next episode.
__________________ Meena SMILES GO MILES Last edited by Laxmi; 1st August 2006 at 04:53 AM. Reason: removed special characters |
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| Most Gracious ILites, Sorry for the delay in posting the 7th part of The Price. Please read it and let me have your views. I ought to have replied to your views on the 6th part. But could not do it because I was travelling since Tuesday onwards. And from Saturday last till Tuesday, I was not psychologically free, due to work pressures (remember this is our peak tax season) and the pressures due to travelling in the very beginning of the month. I am seeing a steady decline in the readhership of this serial. I can have a lot of excuses for that - vacation time, people are otherwise busy, there are many other things vying for their attention and so on. Those of you who are attached to the TV Industry would know that the TRP rating of a serial is cruelly and mercilessly intrepreted, irrespective of the other factors which might have caused the fall in viewership. So I take the blame on myself. Will definitely do my best to improve the quality of my writing. I plan to end this serial next week. From the week after next you will see something different in "Saturdays With Varalotti". Every week we will take up somer controversy (as we did in analysing the opposition to Uyir) or other ranging from homosexuality, living together, illiict relationships, the mall culture, software boom etc. Everything will be bared and nothing spared. Wish you a happy reading. Eagerly waiting for your views and reviews. love, Varalotti |
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