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Love After Marriage!!!

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Rith, Jan 21, 2016.

  1. Rith

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    Episode 1

    The morning cuckoos started kuchikooeing. That is Menaka’s alarm.

    The sky was till dark waiting for light delivery from Sun.

    Every day she wakes up before Sun does. She started her morning chores just like a key driven toy. She is such a lovely mother of Bharath – Our handsome hero

    Bharath is a software professional guy working with an MNC situated just 60 kilometers away from the city. Menaka prepares and packs breakfast, lunch sometimes brunch and evening snacks. So that Bharath never gets an opportunity to dine out.

    After all Bharath is her only world after her husband Mr.Karunakaran left this world when Bharath was just 10 years old. Karunakaran owned a mansion in the heart of the city. Menaka managed to run the household along with Bharath’s education in a well manner. She saved enough for his future education as well. And that’s how Bharath completed his engineering in a reputed college and placed in a world class MNC through campus selection

    Bharath is a typical mamma boy. Even though they didn’t have financial constraint he knows well, how difficult it is to run a bachelor mansion without men’s help for a lady.

    Menaka is a thorn for others; while for Bharath she is always a bed of roses

    The need for mansion grows day by day and Mrs. Menaka’s family runs in a much financially stabilized way.

    Bharath got bangles and gold chain for his mother out of his first month salary. A

    After Karunakaran left her, each and every penny was saved for Bharath. She has never spent anything for her sake until Bharath forces for it. He knows well only after 10 years Menaka started wearing gold ornaments

    Menaka laughs for even silly jokes of Bharath. She wants him to be happy always.

    Bharath has rejected his onsite opportunities just because he doesn’t want to stay away from his mom

    He doesn’t show any interest in marriage as well as he was so afraid whether any girl would take care and adjust with his mother

    He enjoyed his college days like anything. Mass bunk, movies, outing, pot lunch, secret names for professors, question paper hacks, group studies and what not.

    He had been the crush for many girls. But he never looked at anyone.

    Bharath commute by office bus every day. He occupies the last seat along with his friends and kills the travel time by playing anthakshari, dump-charades, chit chats gossips and so and so and so

    The morning and evening tea breaks were never missed which used to be their distress time.

    This handsome, fun loving, naughty, masthi, mamma boy never believed in girls and hence love.

    Sindhu!!! A wheatish complexion, silent, reserved, caring girl who has completed her UG and pursuing post-graduation. She is from a middle class orthodox family. Well groomed with values and respect.

    Her father Ganapathy – a super dooper strict officer is working in state government office. Mother Radha – timid lady who believes and worship husband as God. She has never spoken in front of Ganapathy unless and until it is necessary.

    She is a typical south Indian girl who has completed her schooling, college in a girls convent with no introduction or interaction with boys

    According to her, god has created boys just to dominate girls and commit mistakes & mistakes only

    What will happen when this north and south pole unites by a black magic called MARRIAGE??

    Stay tuned….
     
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  2. Mery

    Mery Silver IL'ite

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    That's a wonderful start for a story Rith....waiting for the next episode...
     
  3. sreeram

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    Wonderful start dear. Enjoyed your narration. All the very best Rith. hugsmiley
     
  4. meerasrini

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    Thats beautiful Start dear :) Loved it .. Eagerly waiting for next as always :2thumbsup:
     
  5. peddadas

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    @Rith.. wowwwwwww... another story for us....such a beautiful narration....:2thumbsup:.
    Let me understand the frequency of your story parts ?? Your plan is to post a part each day and weekends no updates ???
    Please confirm the plan so that i dont go mad ..lol.no doubt....yes i do when the story is breath taking / heart breaking/soothing...what say other IL ladies..wink..

    thats ok if you dont ave plan... just kidding...

    --PS
     
  6. periamma

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    Rith a good start and waiting for next episode
     
  7. meerasrini

    meerasrini Platinum IL'ite

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    @Peddadas: @Rith updates so regularly :) Attimes weekends too She updates :) She never make us wait :) And yes what you said is rite. If Story is Interesting, all this does matter alot :) @Rith wont disappoint us :cheers
     
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    Bang ..... Rith you are rocking. Can't wait to read your episodes everyday. Good start!!!
     
  9. Rith

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    Thank you Mery. Will post the next episode by tomorrow
     
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    Thank you Priya. Enjoy!!
     

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