Dear Friends, This is my first attempt in writing a story.Its love story. please excuse me for any grammer or spelling mistakes as I am not a good writer.Looking for your feedback/suggestions .Hope you will like my story. Many thanks. Characters 1. Deenanath Desai - they are the well known personality in mumbai.They have their own publication house called 'Desai Publications'. They have three children Sushant,Shreyas & Shruti. Alok is the adopted son of him. Sushant is cardiologist by profession.Shreyas & Alok looks after their publication business.Shruti is a crime reporter with famous newspaper Mumbai News which is known for its uprightness. 2. Sulabha Desai- Wife of Deenanath Desai. Loving & caring mother. 3. Aditi Desai- (Female lead)Aditi is 31 year old & niece of Deenanth Dsai,daughter of his elder brother Adinath Desai who stays at their native place & visits them occassionally.She was raised by Deenanath & his wife. Her mother died when she was 3 years old.Aditi is one of the top criminal lawyers in the city who is very stern & never compromises for truth.She considers her uncle & aunt as her parents only & calles them Aai- Baba only. 4.Samar- (Male Lead) He is a rude but fearless & honest IPS officer. His work is his passion. 5. Gayatri & Nisha- They are best firends of Aditi.Gayatri is a RJ & Nisha is working as a corporate lawyer in a MNC. 6. vikrant - Inspector Vikrant is Gayatri's cousin. Chapter 1. It was 6 am in the morning. In Desai Mansion all ladies were busy in their morning cores except Aditi & Shruti,they were still in the sleep. "Aditi ,got up beta,today is yourlast verdict na,come on get ready" said Sulabha softly. Aditi got up & sat in the bed. Shruti was still in deep sleep. Aditi wore her track suit left for morning walk.Before leaving bedroom Aditi went near Sruti & shouted loudly in her ear 'Crrrrrr' Shruti shouted 'aawwwwwwwwww'like some rat fallen on her. Aditi started laughing & ran out of the room. 'Didi I will see you' said Sruti & slept again.After walk Aditi got ready to reach highcourt. Aditi is handling a case of a girl named Meera Mane who was kiled by her in laws for dowry.Her Father in law Mr. Rajendra Mane, a BMC officer wanted to do settlement by offering some land & Rs. 2 lakh to her family as alimony.Meera's father approached Aditi in this matter .After doing some investigation Aditi found that the land that Mane has offered is a barren land, so neither can he sell it nor can he use it.Aditi tells Meera's Father that he will get his daughter's ornaments as they will win the case. Meera's father agrees to her. She presented all the points in court & Rajendra Mane was sent under murder & cheating charges for 7 years prisonment & court ordered him to return Meera's ornaments & Rs. 5 lakh as alimony to Meera's family.Meera's father thanked Aditi whole heartedly & tears rolled down from his eyes. Aditi consoled them & left for office at Bandra. Aditi reached office, after entering office,evry body congratulated her, she was overwhelmed by this sweet surprise. Aditi is working for leagal firm named'Leagal Vision'. Adv Vinita Joshi is her boss.They have total 15 lawyers team & 4 admin people working in the office.Aditi was working as a criminal lawyer & was known as one of the top crminal lawyers in city.They all arranged a small party at lunch time to celebrate the success of their firm.In evening before going home Aditi drove to Lord Krishna temple on the way, she took darshan & reached home. Everyone congratulated her.Shreyas declared that they all are going out for dinner.Deenanath observes that his niece has indeed grown up. At night Aditi retired to bed. Before sleeping she removed her gold chain having a Lord Ganesha pendant in it & kept on the table & slept. It was very special to her as it was gifted by her mother before her demise. Two days later was Ganesh Chaturthi.Desai family brings five days lord Ganesha at their home every year. Everyone was working happily to welcome lord.All decoration,prasad preparation was done. They bought idol of lord at home.After pooja Deenanath offered naivedya to lord & evryone had their lunch.Alok finds Shravani writing poems.He reads out the poems written by Shravani. Everyone praises her. In the evening Aditi went to meet Gayatri & Nisha at Gayatri's place for Ganesha Festival. After darshan they were chitchatting. Gayatri is RJ & Nisha is working with MNC.Aditi asked them that they too had studies law but none of them are practising.Their conversation interrupted when landline phone rings,Gayatri attended the call.It was from her friend Priya. After call Gayatrilooked tense. Aditi sensed some problem is their & she asked" what happened Gayatri? why you are worried? Gayatri" Adi, Priya was on line. she is in serous trouble.she said since last two three days she is being stalked by a boy." Aditi understood everything & said " don't worry Gayatri, we will surely help her'. Next Day they both met Priya at a restaurant. Priya narrated whole incident. Aditi told her that she should lodge a police complaint of the boy who is stalking her.she shoul be strong & not encourage that boy by getting scared. While their conversation was going on suddenly Priya's face went pale & she started shivering. Aditi & Gaytri noticed it & they turn back.
Good one; your writing is awesome. Btw who is Shravani (writing poem). Keep going looking forward for next part.
Good start dear... Waiting for next part... I don't get what do you mean by meera'sher. Just an advice, give space between every paragraph so that it is easy to read.
@leenam05 very good narration. Looks like so many links needs to follow properly..lol :shock:. Please continue as fast as you can. Great going..Good Luck.. --PS
Thanks dishiri87. Meera'sher means meera's father. Sorry for the typing mistake. I will keep in mind your advise of paragraph.
peddadas;@leenam05 very good narration. Looks like so many links needs to follow properly..lol :shock:. Please continue as fast as you can. Great going..Good Luck.. Thank you dear. I am working on next chapter. Try to post ASAP.
HEY hi, story is good ,,,, but so many characters need to follow,,, when started reading felt like real story not ficition ,,, nice going different from regular one,,, but plz post with out any waitings dear