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Mystery

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  1. daisy2015

    daisy2015 Platinum IL'ite

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    [h=1]Part 1[/h]
    “Sir, do you need anything else?” James was brought back to reality by these words. When he turned to answer the air hostess he noticed that the passenger next to him was watching him as if he is some special species discovered by the archaeological department. He realized then that he was smiling all the time. He shook his head and looked outside the window.

    It’s been 2 years since he saw Catherine. He was happy that he finally finished his project and is going back to get married to his love. He planned to give her surprise. After the final submission of legal papers he went to the nearby jewellery shop and bought a necklace with matching stones to the ring he gave her while proposing for marriage. The blue diamond ring did cost a fortune but she was way more precious than that to him. So he decided that it is the best gift for the occasion. She hesitated to accept it as it was too costly but he convinced her that it is nothing before her love for him. She extended her hand towards him and he put it on her finger and kissed her hand.

    James is a well educated, handsome man. He lost his parents in childhood and was brought up by his grandfather Mathew who was a business man. As his grandfather was growing old James thought of helping him in his business. So instead of going for his dream of becoming a musician, he started going to the office. Besides being intelligent he was also kindhearted. So he quickly won over the hearts of his office staff. He worked really hard and took the business to new heights. Every success brings new rivals along with it. Even in James life every tender he won, increased his rivals’ number.

    One day when he was going for a meeting he saw a girl in the office lift and couldn’t take his eyes off her. She was simple yet beautiful. Her eyes were like deep Blue Ocean. The longer you look into them the more you would be lost in the depth of those eyes. This was the first time he saw this girl in his office. Before he could talk to her few more associates came in and started discussing about an issue. By the time they reached the cellar he noticed that she was leaving the office premises and was mounting a taxi. He wanted to go after her and find out who she was but he was getting late for his meeting. So he decided to trace her out after the work is completed and went ahead for the meeting.
     
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  2. sangeethakripa

    sangeethakripa Gold IL'ite

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    Welcome Daisy.. As soon as I saw the title "Mystery", wished it was you. Happy to see you with another new story. Good Luck
     
  3. Lakshmikishore

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    Good start..waiting for the next part
     
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    Good start Daisy!friendssmiley
     
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    Wowww.Another one..Computer Typing .. please please next one!
     
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    daisy2015 Platinum IL'ite

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    Thank you sangeethakripa.
     
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    daisy2015 Platinum IL'ite

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    Thank you meerasrini, peddadas and LakshmiKishore. I will post the next part soon.
     
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    Rith IL Hall of Fame

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    Welcome Daisy!!! Happy to see another diamond in your crown.
     
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    Good to see you start another story. Waiting for the next part.
     

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