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Dable in Drabble - Mixed Emotions

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by guesshoo, Dec 2, 2014.

  1. guesshoo

    guesshoo IL Hall of Fame

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    [h=3]Dable in Drabble - event[/h]
    Sandhya was knackered. Lack of sleep didn't help. She had accepted the fact that her husband wasn't just hers anymore. How was he able to transfer his attentions and affections so completely, so quickly? She turned to look at Ananya again. No wonder, she thought as pride surged through her. Newborns are designed to bewitch.
     
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  2. Jey

    Jey Administrator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    guesshoo, how did you develop this expansive a vocabulary? Learned two new words - knackered and bewitch. Btw, the story is awesome! I am guilty of that too.
     
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    Laks09 Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Wow, Gueshoo. I didn't know an author his behind that cognisant mentor like facade. Keep it coming! Great story.
     
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  4. guesshoo

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    Thank you, Jey, Laks. Just trying my hand at fiction; your generous comments puff me up like I've just won the Booker! :)
     
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    Rise Platinum IL'ite

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    thts a nice one.........
     
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    aww... heard it, have been it, and nice to read it too.. love the story
     
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    Thank you, Rise and Tuffy. This story perhaps belongs in non-fiction... ;)
     
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