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Better half or best half??? Part-1

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by divshiri87, May 2, 2014.

  1. divshiri87

    divshiri87 Gold IL'ite

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    Hi readers,
    Thank you for your continuous support in my first story “Phone call..”. Now I am back with this story. This story is a combination of love and suspense. Hope you will enjoy this story like earlier one and please pour your comments.


    Here it goes...

    I am a girl who do not think about life partner. When I was in 10[SUP]th[/SUP] standard, one of my classmates proposed his love. I rejected saying that “this is not right time for love and life will be better if we concentrate in studies”. He left that place without utter any word. After some days he left my school saying that his father got transfer to some other place. I felt happy because if he leaves this place, he will be good in studies. And another reason for my happiness is that I won’t see him again in my school. I finished my 10[SUP]th[/SUP] standard with average marks.

    I joined in 11[SUP]th[/SUP] standard in another school. I generally love to take leaves often and spend a day at home. So that day also I took leave and next day I went to school. My chemistry teacher questioned me about leave for which I that I was not feeling well. He said “Tomorrow there is an exam and prepare for that”. I nodded my head and left that place.

    I was a group of people standing in my class near black board discussing something. Suddenly a guy came and said “Manu, I want to talk with you personally”.

    My name is Manu.

    I said “If you want to talk, talk here. I don’t want to talk anything personally and these people are my friends. You can very well talk here”. He pleaded me many times to come to another room for which I denied.

    He asked me again “Manu, please can you come to next room? I said its personal and you are asking me to talk in front of your friends. I can’t talk here and I want you to come to that room for a minute”.

    I replied “If you can’t talk here, I can’t come with you”.

    He was shouting at me. I didn’t pay any attention to his words and started talking to my friends.

    Suddenly he opened one bottle and tried to pour that liquid on my face.
    A guy came in between and that liquid fell on his face.
    Yes, it was acid. I didn't know what happened after that because i felt unconsious after that incident happened.

    Story to be continued...


     
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  2. divyagshenoy

    divyagshenoy Senior IL'ite

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    very well written....waiting for the next part
     
  3. springsnb

    springsnb Gold IL'ite

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    Looks like u came up this a new story related to real incidents.... Divi am I correct...? Welcome
     
  4. saarang

    saarang Local Champion Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Good start... waiting for the next part
     
  5. Madhumidha

    Madhumidha Gold IL'ite

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    Good one!!! Waiting for your next post!!!
     
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    keerthi286 Senior IL'ite

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    Nice story...Good one!!! Waiting for your next post!!!
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello Divshiri
    Nice to see you back with a new story.
    Good start....Hope we will get the next one soon.
     
  8. divshiri87

    divshiri87 Gold IL'ite

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    Sorry Ils for such a long gap. Got time now to spend in indusladies again. I will post the next part of this story soon.
    And nothing here is of true incidents. Just a fiction...
     
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    twinklingstar Gold IL'ite

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    wow another new story.....m so happy.
    it is nice start dear...request you to post regularly ....thanks
     
  10. sreeram

    sreeram IL Hall of Fame

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    Good start... post regularly dear...

    All the best...
     

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