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The Coat!!

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by lovelyme, Mar 18, 2012.

  1. lovelyme

    lovelyme Silver IL'ite

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    11 PM.


    I was waiting in the bus stop for the bus after finishing my official work. It might be a no moon night as I couldn't see it in the sky. The climate was made cool by the gently blowing breeze. Seemed that it would rain soon.

    I took the water bottle from my bag and drank it and wiped my face with the hand kerchief. The darkness kindled my fear a bit which was dug deep in my heart. That made me look around the place and I was a bit relieved by seeing two more men standing little away from me.

    For a second I thought of going to them and talk. But I hesitated thinking that they might look at me with suspicion. I did not want to get embarrassed. They too didn't seem to notice my presence. The whole place seemed to be a little scary at that moment. I struggled hard to control my rioting thoughts.

    Ten minutes passed and a bus came. The two passengers lodged in it. The bus was not going to my destination. I was left alone there. suddenly it started to drizzle and I didn't want to get wet. I turned around for some shelter and I could see a small house behind me at a little distance. Without giving a second thought I ran there to protect myself from the rain. The house was locked from outside and hung a big and thick lock.

    The roof was maintained in a way that I could get a small shelter to keep me away from the rain. I could see the sky shooting with lightning and thunder occasionally. The lightning bathed the road with light in front of me in regular intervals.

    In one such lightning I could see somebody standing in the bus stop. But the visual lasted for only a few micro seconds and I was curious to know who was standing there not bothering about the heavy down pour. So I waited for another lightning to have another look at the image and I hadn't have to wait much.

    This time I had a clearer view of a coat. With the help of lightnings I could sort out that it was a full length coat standing in the air with no human in. The hands were flying and fluttering with the wind effect. I could feel the fear squeezing my abdomen at the same time I felt an urge to go near and see it. But the fear in me succeeded and I did not dare to take a step from there.

    I had a feel that the coat could see me from there. A bus was coming fast and I could go in that and a part of me really wanted to. But the other part told me to wait there to see what it was with the coat.

    So I waited there....

    (Will end by next episode):coffee


     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Simi

    So what is that Coat about:shaking::shaking:do let us know fast.
    What a girl she is why she wants to know about the coat and get scard:)

    What happened to the blue eyes the story is not completed na......or did I miss the last episode??
     
  3. lovelyme

    lovelyme Silver IL'ite

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    Dear Aruna,

    Thanks for the beautiful fb first.

    The protagonist is a he not a she.

    Oh! Those Blue eyes is not completed yet. The episodes will be posted soon.

    Love,

    Simi..
     
  4. Pallavi4me

    Pallavi4me Platinum IL'ite

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    OMG............

    What a situation & your narration is really good...

    So what will happen next........ would like to know and read next part..
     
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    sapthu02 Gold IL'ite

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    whats next.. you left me waiting........ please post it soon !!
     
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    shashiv Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Simi,

    You left us in suspense.... post soon..


    Shanti
     
  7. lovelyme

    lovelyme Silver IL'ite

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    Dear Pallavi,

    Thank you so very much for the wonderful fb.

    Please wait for two or three days more to know the secret of the coat.

    Regards
     
  8. lovelyme

    lovelyme Silver IL'ite

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    Dear Sapthana,

    Thank you for the feed back.

    Please wait to know more.

    Regards
     
  9. lovelyme

    lovelyme Silver IL'ite

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    Dear Shanti,

    Thanks for the feed back.

    I promise I will not make you wait much... I will post soon..

    Take care,

    Love,

    Simi..
     
  10. nnarmadha

    nnarmadha Platinum IL'ite

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    HEy..Who is the coat?? Eagerly waiting to break yr suspense!!!
     

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