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Old 16th August 2007, 06:53 PM
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Default Galatta Marriage- short comedy serial part 2

Part 2:

Sankaran: Till Vanaja joins why not Suresh entertain us with some songs.

Lakshmi: We have kept a music teacher and taught him carnatic music. His teacher is the desciple of M.D. Ramanathan who was the desciple of Tiger Vardachariyar. His teacher Krishnamoorthy Bhagavathar used to say that Suresh is singing like Tiger himself. (She smiles proudly).

Sankaran: Oh! is it true? Come on, Suresh give us some good sangathi.

Suresh: Actually I can't sing without accompanying instruments. Anyway, I will sing. He sings
'Varaveena mrithupaani
vanaruka lochana rani
suruchira pampara veni
suranutha kalyani
nirupama subaguna lOlaa
nirata jayaaprada sheelaa
varadaapriya ranganaayaki
vaancita pala daayaki
saraseejaasana jananee
jaya jaya jaya'

Sankaran to Lakshmi: You told that Suresh will sing like Tiger himself, but he is singing like reciting nursery rhymes. Ha ha ha (he laughs)

Lakshmi: Actually Suresh had a sour throat. But, in order to respect your request he sang that is all. What is wrong with Varavenna song? It is in praise of Devi. Sankaran apologises to Lakshmi.

Just then, Veena brings Vanaja who is clad in silk saree and has her hair well braided and a nice pottu on the forehead.

Sankaran to Veena: Where is Vanaja? who is this girl? from next doors?

Veena: This is Vanaja. Open your eyes widely and see.

Sankaran: Oh! My God!. Having seen Vanaja always in pant and shirt, I am not able to recognize my own daughter (laughs loudly). Amma Vanaja, when you were grtting dressed, Suresh entertained us with songs.

Vanaja: Oh, lovely!. Suresh do you dance as well? We can go to Sun TV's 'Perfect Couple' program.

Sankaran: 'Adiye enkarathuku aambadayanai kanom, pilaai per kichami nu sonnalam'. Vanaja, still it is not decided about your marriage and you are talking of 'Perfect Couple' program.

Vanaja: So what dad? I like Suresh and I am going to marry him. If you don't agree we will have 'Washingtonil Thirumanam' (marriage in Washington).

Suresh: Thank you, Vanaja. I will be like the lamb of 'Mary had a little lamb' poem. You know wherever Mary goes the lamb is sure to go behind her. Ha ha ha..... (he laughs uncontrollably).

Sankaran to Gopalan: Did you see that both of them have decided themselves to get married. If we want to save our respect we have to perform the marriage immeditely.

Gopalan: I fully agree with you and let us start the preparations.

Vanaja: Uncle, before marriage I want to take Suresh out to disco with me. Do you have any objection?

Sankaran: Why Vanaja to disco? so that later he can dance to your tunes? Ha ha ha.. (He laughs loudly).

To be continued......

Part 3 is here
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Old 16th August 2007, 07:24 PM
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This is really a fun read!
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DearTDU,
Read both parts of the comedy serial. Your narration is very vivid and gives me a feel as though im watching the serial.

Great go! Keep Rocking!
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Dear TDU sir,

read 2 parts at a go, the narration is very very good and eagerly waiting for your next part.

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Dear TDU,
is your origin tirunelveli, only there they always have a vachanam as reference the way you have mentioned here...moving very fast...and nice read..sunkan
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TDU sir,
Enjoyed part 2, too!


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Dear Mythraeyi, Aishu, sreelatha, sunkan, ans Sindhuja,

Thanks to all of you for posting your comments which I cherish.

Sunkan - How correctly you found out that my poorveeham is Thirunelveli! My native place is Narasinga Naloor near Suthamalli near Pettai near thirunelveli Town.

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TDU Sir,

Enjoyed part 2 also. I hope u post more like these.
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Thanks, madhu. Yes, I will try to post some comedies. I enjoy reading as well as writting comedies which energises me.

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TDU sir
Enjoyed your comedy serial (part 1 & 2) and eagerly waiting for the remaining episodes too.

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