Hey, Me and Fay! ....

Dear Oviya

I enjoyed the narrative technique with the dialogue.

You have written very well about a natural disaster about to happen with a nice touch of humor!

Look forward to more of your writing.

Thank you so much, Bhiku....

Dear Usha,

Thank you so much...

Will try to write more...

My Dear DD,

In a way all fathers are bad. They don't know the real worth of their daughters. For them the daughters are always little girls wanting to get that fancy ribbon or that glittering chudi. Little do the fathers know that their daughters can be smart doctors, good accountants or as it is proved in this case, wonderful writers.

I enjoyed every bit of the narration, DD. When you raised doubts about the dog being Kamal I had a hearty laugh. Believe me I was right with there you and your DH in the storm, rather in the eye of it.

Kidding apart, it was really a gripping narration with an excellent sense of humour. The words were exactly in place and they did their job very well.
On the whole, it was an excellent piece of writing.

I am proud of you, DD.
Love,
Your SriPa

Originally Posted by Oviya

Dear Aruna,

Welcome back after the vacation...

Thanks..

Yeah...we the women do panic more...O...the groceries ...

Thanks Oviya for the welcoming note

Hi Oviya

Loved this piece with interesting and original one liners
Thank God your family emerged safe from Fay.

Regards.

Hi Oviya..

It was a superb narration with a fine lace of humour..

I loved your DH's retort
"It is cheaper to pay a rent and stay in a corner of the store!"

And 50 boiled eggs!!!!! OMG ...

It was too good..
Thanx

Originally Posted by varalotti

My Dear DD,

In a way all fathers are bad. They don't know the real worth of their daughters. For them the daughters are always little girls wanting to get that fancy ribbon or that glittering chudi. Little do the fathers know that their daughters can be smart doctors, good accountants or as it is proved in this case, wonderful writers.

I enjoyed every bit of the narration, DD. When you raised doubts about the dog being Kamal I had a hearty laugh. Believe me I was right with there you and your DH in the storm, rather in the eye of it.

Kidding apart, it was really a gripping narration with an excellent sense of humour. The words were exactly in place and they did their job very well.
On the whole, it was an excellent piece of writing.

I am proud of you, DD.
Love,
Your SriPa

My dear SriPa,

Thank you so much for stepping in and rewarding me with your valuable comments...

Daughters, too, love and proud being in the shelter of their fathers forever. When they are identified by their fathers for something they did, they will be on top of the world.

Love,
Your dear DD.

Originally Posted by oaktree

Hi Oviya

Loved this piece with interesting and original one liners
Thank God your family emerged safe from Fay.

Regards.

Hi Oaktree,

Thanks for stopping by to read this thread and for your concern....

Originally Posted by Saraswathipv

Hi Oviya..

It was a superb narration with a fine lace of humour..

I loved your DH's retort
"It is cheaper to pay a rent and stay in a corner of the store!"

And 50 boiled eggs!!!!! OMG ...

It was too good..
Thanx

Dear Saras,

Thank you so much...

Like most of the men, he hates shopping to the core.

I have to make him realise that shopping has to be done every week. Imagine his plight during hurricane. There happened an extra session, in the mid of the week .