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Old 23rd June 2008, 04:51 AM
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Scene One
She Came to home in the evening after attending a ladies sangeet pary at their neighbor’s place held prior to marriage of their daughter .
Her husband Dr. M was at home He enquired how the evening was. She replied that it was alright but I am having a headache.
Oh He said u better lie down I will make a cup of tea for u & if it is not relieved will give u some Medication.

She was feeling so lucky to have such a considerate husband; she was married to him only for last 4 months. It was an arranged marriage, her parents were quite impressive with her husband & respected him much as he was doctor with a master’s degree in surgery, was the only son from a well to do educated family and has not demanded any dowry.Though She herself was also quite beautiful & educated.

She was lying down but her headache was still there. He brought the tea & she asked him that plz give me tablet for this.
He said OK I will give u an injection that will act rapidly & improve your headache. Though she was scared of injections but thinking that he himself wud give it she consented.
He prepared the injection & gave her; she closed her eyes & after some time drifted in sleep.
But the sleep was very deep & after 1 hour the husband was trying to awake her but she was dead!
Her husband called a Neighbor- a fellow Doctor who examined her & pronounced her dead.
The news spread fast in this small town & everybody was wondering how cud a healthy girl be dropped dead like this? Only just few hours back she was singing & dancing at ladies sangeet.
There was much confusion & enquiry how it happened?
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The husband gave reason that probably she had a brain hemorrhage as her complaint of headache. And in past also she used to have such headaches.
Though there were some behind the scene discussions of some mal intentions but nothing cud be said. The doctor was much respected.

Dr.M. showed the injection wrapper & broken vial to the neighbor doctor who accepted that it was a simple pain killer.

Yet people kept talking that he might have murdered her, some body suggested to report to police but the trusty of hospital interfered that he doesn’t believe that she was murdered.

The parents were informed & they reached after two days as were far away in MP.They were informed that she had died of brain hemorrhage.
They were not influential people accepted the version of brain hemorrhage & funeral was done. Though the city kept budging with gossips that he might have murdered her.
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Scene two follows….
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Old 23rd June 2008, 04:55 AM
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Arre Jaishree, why do you do this? Stopping so abruptly.............. was totally dissappointed.

Good narration as I love mysteries I was just hooked to it and you gave a commercial break..........not fair. Please post the second one fast.
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Old 23rd June 2008, 04:57 AM
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Hi Jaishree,

Good read, But Il save my comments until your next follow up.I might think somebody innocent only to know he/she is the culprit. so lets wait to read more.
Hope it follows soon!!

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Old 23rd June 2008, 05:03 AM
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Dear Lalita
Sorry to stop abruptly as the next scene is bit longer & so I thought to limit it here.
I will post second one very soon ,Thanks for such a Fast FB.
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Old 23rd June 2008, 05:05 AM
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Dear Devika
Thanks so much for ur so fast FB.Yes It is true that this may be a natural disaster but I wud like You to read second scene which I will post shortly & then comment.
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Old 23rd June 2008, 05:48 AM
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Mystery story, I like it...waiting for the second scene....jaishree...

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Dear jayashree,

good read.Eagerly waiting for the next post.Bring it soon.
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Hi jaishree,

would you post remaining scene ,I think im getting headache of imagining what would actually be happenend..

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Dear Jaishree,

A great story, and now we have to wait anxiously for the second part.Send it fast.HAAH.

I think there was an Airbubble in the injection left deliberatly to kill her.??

Regards.kamal
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Dear Jaishree
Wonderful story.. told so well and in crisply.. cannot wait for the continuation!
Theres a great story writer hidden in you dear
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