Alamelu, Gowri & KA - The Destiny

Dear rs

Somehow missed this beautiful thread. I was tooo emotional reading this. It really pulled my heart strings.

A very nicely written piece.

Dear lalitha ,

Thanks for taking time to read the thread.......iam happy that i was able to touch few souls ......in my very first attempt.

Thanks for the feedback.

Aha dear Ramya, So there is a lovely story writer in you. !!

Lovely story dear,excellent for a first attempt.

Yes Gowri sure is a very mature kid and would grow up very strong,Even at this age her maturity that comes as a stregth would be an inspiration to many!!

Lovely Ramya, I truly enjoyed it!!

Love,
Devika

My dear Devika,

Glad that you enjoyed the story iam feeling @ cloud nine ......thanks for the feedback my dear friend. Though iam not much expressive like the versatile writers here in IL iam very happy to be noticed.

Thanks again......

Dear rs18
So beautiful and touchy and such a sad story, we all write about the life of rich and famous but who will write about the really hardship of the life of these hard working people actually these r the one who do most of our work. Really well written feeling sorry for the little one so quickly she understood her responsiblities and now she is going to work in order to look after her brother, at such a tender small age.

Dear Ramya,

Superb and touching.And congrats for this being rightly nominated.I too will nomiante this today.Regards.kamal

Dear Ramya,
I just saw your post being nominated and read it. .
Oh.. very touchy. .my heart is heavy now as I read the whole story.. Just thinking of Gowri...For a first time writer, you have done it exceedingly well and kindled the emotions of the reader...

Well deserved to be nominated.. Keep going...

Regards,
Priya

Wow! really neat story.
Hoping to read many more from you.

Ria

Heart touching and heart wrenching story Ramya! Simply wonderful!

The FP nomination brought me here.And I am so glad that it did, otherwise I would've missed this beautiful story from you.

I was happy to note that Gowri at least had a job in a decent home to make her living from. But I could not stop myself for feeling bad that Gowri had to give up on her education. I strongly feel that if we can afford we should surely sponsor (if not full, may be part or even just a little) towards an under privileged child's education. I think there is no better gift ever than contributing towards someone's education. It is a priceless gift that lasts a lifetime.

We had a maidservant whose son went on to become an Engineer. My parents had the maid open a separate bank account and we used to deposit a small amount every month for the maid’s son’s education all the way until he became an Engineer. The maid had stopped working at our house many years ago but the contributions continued. In addition, Daddy always guided him in subjects like Math, Science, and Electronics just like he guided us, his own kids. I remembered this kid when I read your story.

Ramya, incredible story and narration for a first timer. A much deserved nomination indeed!

SS

Dear Aruna,

Gowri was likely a part of me.may be bcoz of which i was able to express the better.
Thanks for the prompt feedback.