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This Kid With Aids !

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by Devika Menon, Apr 2, 2008.

  1. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    THIS KID WITH AIDS

    The craving in the hungry eyes
    The dry lips and the hoarse cries

    The desperate feeling, needing protection
    But all he gets, the poor kid is isolation

    Born to a woman, once so strong with splendor
    A lady with a force and full of vigour

    Until the time, when she met a man so virile
    He took her for a while, his love so infantile

    She but was sure, that this man was he
    With whom she would spend her life in glee

    Oh later she knew that this was a prison,
    She stepped in the wrong groove, as he was a treason

    But couldn’t do much as his kid had taken life
    Yes immorally though, she yet wasn’t his wife

    She bought him into the world but the kid never saw her smile
    He thought it will come surely though after a while

    Alas but she knew now that soon she would cease
    Her paramour had given her the dreaded disease

    The stigma she faced killed her a millionth time
    Take her away God, her life is like a crime

    She passed away and ended her misery
    But then the kid never knew now it would be he

    So as the moments pass and await the final call
    His tender life so empty had nothing to recall

    He would have loved to play and be free
    After all he was a kid and that’s what he wanted to be

    But as he waited at the gate and spread out his hands
    At least come now shouts his call while he still has a chance

    This house full of kids, but only just cries
    He wanted to be out twinkling like the stars in the skies

    Touching and playing will not give you Aids
    Infact it will let him live and smoothen life’s blades

    If you ever meet a kid with Aids, don’t give a miss
    Don’t worry instead go ahead and plant him a kiss

    He would feel wanted and will wish to live
    After all your love is all that he wants you to give.

    Dear Friends,

    Loving and playing with these children will not give anyone AIDS. These are innocent victims. Let us make up for the ill fate. Let our love provide some respite. My humble request to all!!

    Love,
    Devika
     
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  2. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Devika,
    Another piece from you, which sheds light on the plight of the children of AIDS....
    True only true love will make them live with hope...

    Well written..
    sriniketan
     
  3. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Srini,

    Thankyou so much for the opening FB. Yes Srini if all that someone requires is a little love , I think that is something which we can effortlessly give. This is exactly the message behind this post.

    Love,
    Devika

     
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    Beautiful poem Devika....What/Who is your Muse?

    Hats off to your Muse

    Regards,

    Corallux
     
  5. Devika Menon

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    Dear Lakshmi,

    Thankyou so much for your appreciation. If you ask me who's my muse, I'd say with the problems galore does one really require a muse??

    Love,
    Devika
     
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    very well rendered devika, it is pathetic when i child is denied his right for love..sunkan[​IMG]
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Devika
    that was a beautiful one. With the awareness too.
    Yes by showing a little bit of love to these kids we will not get AIDS.............
    Hats Off my friend for getting such wonderful thing here..
     
  8. Devika Menon

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    Dear Sunkan,
    Thanks for writing in!
    Yes this one was written with a message in mind. I recently met someone with AIDS and the pathetic state and the embarrasment and fear of this person , triggered this poem in me.I hope with so much love in the universe some can defintely be spared for those who require it the most!
    Love,
    Devika
     
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  10. Devika Menon

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    My Dear Aruna,
    Thankyou so much for the wonderful words. I just thought that as women we all can do something for a cause. I recently met someone and wanted to do something for this person and as you know the pen is mightier than the sword.So just wanted to spread the message of love for these Aids victims.

    Love,
    Devika
     

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