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Where OM ends MA begins!!!

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by Devika Menon, Mar 8, 2008.

  1. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    The first face I saw was of yours MA
    The first feed I had was yours MA
    The first time I walked was holding you MA
    The first time I feared I’d fall you held MA
    The first word I said when I could was MA
    The first wound of mine you dressed and cured MA
    The first day of school you cried with me too MA
    The first time you fought with the neighbours for me you were so strong MA
    The first crush of mine you knew MA
    The first time I won you screamed with joy MA
    The first grey hair of yours I pulled out MA
    The first time after marriage while I went you choked on tears MA
    The first time I went away you couldn’t speak MA
    The first letter of yours made me cry so much MA
    The first time I told you about being a granny you danced MA
    The first time you held my baby you kissed my forehead MA
    The first face my daughter saw was yours MA
    Someday she too will write this to me MA
    And I’d relive our life together MA
    Today I write this MA
    Because you are the strongest woman I know MA
    I have left my life in your reins MA
    BECAUSE WHERE OM ENDS MA BEGINS MA!!

    I Worship you MA
    Your Daughter
    Devika
     
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  2. SoaringSpirit

    SoaringSpirit Silver IL'ite

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    Wonderful Devika!

    This warm and snuggly blanket of mommy's warmth woven beautifully by your words is welcome on a rather chilly day like this.

    Yes, Mom is all the sweetest and fondest things in life rolled into one.

    Makes me want to be a better Mom every time I think about my Mom.

    SS
     
  3. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Hey SS,

    A very Happy Woman's Day to you dear!!

    Thanks for the opening . Yes Moms warmth is always welcome. When we think of Woman's Day the first woman that comes to our minds is our Mother. Thats why I thought it apt to post something today on Woman's Day dedicated to all mothers of the world.

    Devika

     
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    ansh12 Bronze IL'ite

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    Hi Devika

    Beautiful post

    An ode to both ma and MA

    love
    Ansh
     
  5. aquamarine

    aquamarine Senior IL'ite

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    Dear Devika,

    A very poignant ode to a mother, who protects us and thinks of our well being through out i think it is because god cannot be every where he made mothers...you have raised so many emotions in your poem....lovely piece....

    Bravo my friend.

    Warm wishes,

    Aqua.
     
  6. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Hey Ansh,

    Wish you a very Happy Woman's Day dear,

    I am glad you liked the post

    Its a salutation to my Mother , the greatest power I've encountered in my life and I owe her all I am today!!

    Devika


    quote=ansh12;250805]Hi Devika

    Beautiful post

    An ode to both ma and MA

    love
    Ansh[/quote]
     
  7. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Hi Aqua,

    Thanks for appreciating the post!!
    You are so right, That is why I have said where Om ends Ma begins. In Ma ,we can all feel the presence of Om.

    Regards,
    Devika




    quote=aquamarine;250909]Dear Devika,

    A very poignant ode to a mother, who protects us and thinks of our well being through out i think it is because god cannot be every where he made mothers...you have raised so many emotions in your poem....lovely piece....

    Bravo my friend.

    Warm wishes,

    Aqua.[/quote]
     
  8. Kamalji

    Kamalji IL Hall of Fame

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    Devika,

    A Wonderful ode to a mother.How true.Now that we are parents ourselves, and the kids whom we have given birth to, sometimes backanswer us, then we know what our mothers did for us, and how much they went thru to raise us up, and educate us with the limited resources they had then at their disposal,sacrificing a movie, to pay our school fee.

    what can i say, a moving piece.Regards.kamal
     
  9. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Devika,

    A beautiful ode to mother.
     
  10. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Kamalji,

    Thanx for appreciating the ode.
    Youre so right , Our parents have been so instrumental in shaping our lives and they have sacrificed a lot , but we never realised it till we ourselves now don the mantle of being a parent , and we realise the hardships faced by them . Our recognition fo the efforts is their ultimate solace in life!!

    Devika


     

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