Haiku -- 2

Lover

My lovelorn fingers
Found -- her hand cold 'n clammy.
Alas! She didn't love.


Politics

Two stray dogs fighting
For life outside the Samsad.
Inside fight others.



[Note: I have tried to stick to the traditional syllable structure. 5-7-5.]

Ojaantrik sir,

I am sorry , what is a samsad,if I may ask?

meera

Originally Posted by meera2503

Ojaantrik sir,

I am sorry , what is a samsad,if I may ask?

meera

Samsad = Parliament.

oh yes,Sansad ,

good one sir,


regards

meera

Originally Posted by ojaantrik

Two stray dogs fighting
For life outside the Samsad.
Inside fight others.


[Note: This haiku has the traditional syllable structure. 5-7-5.]

Wow....That was a great Haiku indeed..!! Great Oj sir...

Sir
what an apt description of Sansad on 22 july specially & that too in so little words.
Great.

Originally Posted by brindhak

Wow....That was a great Haiku indeed..!! Great Oj sir...

Thank you. I added one more after you wrote your comment. This has a different flavour.

Cheers.

Originally Posted by jaishree9

Sir
what an apt description of Sansad on 22 july specially & that too in so little words.
Great.

Yes that's the beauty as well as power of the haiku form. Sticking to the syllable structure is the hardest part I guess. But the idea is also important. I understand haikus are now a favourite across the world. I love them.

Originally Posted by ojaantrik

Thank you. I added one more after you wrote your comment. This has a different flavour.

Cheers.

Yeah..You have added another one !..
Thanx for sharing... Im fan of Haiku's ..Short and Sweet !!

Expecting More OJ sir ..!!