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| Dear Dreamy.... Read both the parts..A good message indeed ..!! Some girls are like Dhruthi .....they play with Love without knowing how much the other person gets hurt if they come to know that its not true Love....... You have wriiten the pain of false Love very nicely.... Let more stories flow from you pen !!! Good Luck !!!
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| I liked the juxtaposition of the two names Dhruti and Dhruv. I wonder what Dhruti means. I couldn't locate the word in my etymological dictionary. There is wisdom in your message. However, young people are likely to be mischievous -- can't be helped. And, though Dhruv was young too, wasn't he a bit too gullible? I mean is it wise to fall in love with an unknown letter writer? One should immediately suspect that someone is leg pulling. No? |
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| Dear DG, I read both the parts at one go........... Real Gud one ! Lot of Mischief plays a havoc with other's emotions but luckily Dhruv could get out of that.
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| Dear Brindha, Thanx a lot for your lovely feedback..Yeah People play with other´s feelings knowingly or unknowingly but they couldn´t estimate how painful it will be... Thanq once again for expecting more stories from me.. Hugs, dg.. Quote:
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| Dear Oj sir, I thin meaning of Dhruthi is Courage.. Yeah,very true Young are alwyas mischievous but they should know its limits.. As you said Dhruv ignored the letters at the beginning bu they are coming regularly and he liked the poems very much and attracted to thm..Hmmmmmmm It´s Human nature to fall in to wrong ways.. Thanq very much for Pening down ,Your Feedback made my story more Special.. Hugs, dg.. Quote:
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| Dear Lalitha, Happy to know that You liked the story..Yeah we do one orthe other time a mischievous things in my life but that should not hurt other´s emotions.. Tried a lot to justify Dhruthi and Dhruv´s characters.. Thanq for reading the story with Patience.. Hugs, dg.. |
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| HI dg, Read the entire story in one go. I really like the way you write in pure simple manner. No mincing of words. Great going gal. Roopa. |
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