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Old 20th July 2008, 04:27 PM
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It is the end of graduation,Dhruthi´s marriage was fixed with Raj and it is an arranged marriage. She is really worried about Dhruv, she started a love game immaturely with her negative emotions against Dhruv. But now it seems Dhruv is completely Drown in Anamika´s Love.Dhruthi decides to reveal about Anamika.She went to Dhruv gave her Wedding Invitation and said everything about why she has to become Anamika . She felt very sorry. Dhruv shocked by listening to Dhruthi, and unable to accept the truth that Dhruthi is Anamika with whom he was in love for so long. Dhruv looked straightly in to Dhruth´s eyes and uttered strongly“”How stupidly you behaved Dhruthi, as a lecturer I corrected you, but without considering your mistake, U played a Love game with my feelings and emotions, Do you know my aunt´s daughter Nayan, who is good friend of me revealed her love to me, but I blindly rejected her because of you in my heart, I always believed that one day we will definitely meet and I was very serious and sincere towards our love.”How stupid I´m to love someone with Poems in letters”. Then Dhruv walked out with out listening to Dhruthi´s excuse. Tears were rolling from Dhruthi´s cheeks; she regretted and realized how much big mistake she did. After that Dhruthi got married married and settled with Raj in another city but Dhruv´s words always haunted her.


Dhruthi smelled some burnt smell which brought her to Prcatical world, Oh my god! It´s kheer, shecompletely forgot about it .Rushed in to kitchen and dropped the Kheer bowl in the sink. She is very happy now after seeing Dhruv´s Wedding invitation and decided to go to the marriage.

Dhruthi reached the wedding hall with Raj, after couple of years she is seeing Dhruv he is looking very handsome and Nayan is like a princess in Wedding dress. She is walking near Dhruv to congratulate; her heart raised its beating, Unable to guess how Dhruv will react after seeing her. Dhruthi and Raj congratulated Dhruv and Nayan.Raj is busy in talking with Nayan .Dhruthi could not catch straight eye with Dhruv, But Dhruv understood her inconvenience and started saying “Anamika , You had played with my emotions by using false love..Which cannot be forgivable..But being a Lecturer and elder to you I forgave your childish tactics..I managed my emotions with heart and thought how painful it will be to Nayan when I rejected her. So after coming out from your love I proposed Nayan and asked to Marry .Nayan was very modest and without questioning she agreed to my Proposal .Dhruv looked at Nayan and said I´m lucky to get my Love, Hope you will never play this kind of emotional games with anyone in your life”…Dhruthi´s aka Anamika´s eyes were filled with happy tears and her eyes said thankingly to him “U acted very maturely with the heart emotions and saved 3 hearts from Pain , its mine,Ur´s and Nayan´s. “


When emotions are managed by the heart, they heighten your awareness of the world around you and add sparkle to life. The result is new intelligence and a new view of life….

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Dear Dreamy....

Read both the parts..A good message indeed ..!! Some girls are like Dhruthi .....they play with Love without knowing how much the other person gets hurt if they come to know that its not true Love....... You have wriiten the pain of false Love very nicely....

Let more stories flow from you pen !!! Good Luck !!!
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I liked the juxtaposition of the two names Dhruti and Dhruv. I wonder what Dhruti means. I couldn't locate the word in my etymological dictionary. There is wisdom in your message. However, young people are likely to be mischievous -- can't be helped. And, though Dhruv was young too, wasn't he a bit too gullible? I mean is it wise to fall in love with an unknown letter writer? One should immediately suspect that someone is leg pulling. No?
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Dear DG,

I read both the parts at one go........... Real Gud one !

Lot of Mischief plays a havoc with other's emotions but luckily Dhruv could get out of that.
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Dear Brindha,

Thanx a lot for your lovely feedback..Yeah People play with other´s feelings knowingly or unknowingly but they couldn´t estimate how painful it will be...

Thanq once again for expecting more stories from me..

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Dear Dreamy....

Read both the parts..A good message indeed ..!! Some girls are like Dhruthi .....they play with Love without knowing how much the other person gets hurt if they come to know that its not true Love....... You have wriiten the pain of false Love very nicely....

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Dear Oj sir,

I thin meaning of Dhruthi is Courage..
Yeah,very true Young are alwyas mischievous but they should know its limits..
As you said Dhruv ignored the letters at the beginning bu they are coming regularly and he liked the poems very much and attracted to thm..Hmmmmmmm It´s Human nature to fall in to wrong ways..

Thanq very much for Pening down ,Your Feedback made my story more Special..

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I liked the juxtaposition of the two names Dhruti and Dhruv. I wonder what Dhruti means. I couldn't locate the word in my etymological dictionary. There is wisdom in your message. However, young people are likely to be mischievous -- can't be helped. And, though Dhruv was young too, wasn't he a bit too gullible? I mean is it wise to fall in love with an unknown letter writer? One should immediately suspect that someone is leg pulling. No?
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Dear Lalitha,

Happy to know that You liked the story..Yeah we do one orthe other time a mischievous things in my life but that should not hurt other´s emotions..

Tried a lot to justify Dhruthi and Dhruv´s characters..

Thanq for reading the story with Patience..

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I read both the parts at one go........... Real Gud one !

Lot of Mischief plays a havoc with other's emotions but luckily Dhruv could get out of that.
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HI dg,

Read the entire story in one go.

I really like the way you write in pure simple manner. No mincing of words.

Great going gal.

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Dear DG
I read both parts in one sitting.Its really good.
Yes most of the time adolascents & colleage Youth play such pranks which may change one's life .
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Hi Roopa,

Happy to know that u liked Anamika..Yeah I too like writing in simple english..

Thanq for your mativation..

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HI dg,

Read the entire story in one go.

I really like the way you write in pure simple manner. No mincing of words.

Great going gal.

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