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Old 9th June 2008, 07:59 AM
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Default sila kavithaigal ungal paarvaiku

Alagaai adukia puthagangal....
Sethukiathu ponra alamaarigal....
Nerthiyaai aduki vaithirukum udaigal....
Thudaithu vaitha mejaigal.....
Ivai anaithum oorjitham seiginrana....
Namathu illathil unathu irupinai....

Avatrai kalaipatharkaaga naan.....
Seri seivatharkaaga nee.......


mozhigal-------------

puriyaatha mozhigalil sila vaarthaigal...............
adhai ponrathu nam uravu ...........
purinthikolamalye sirikirom..............
purinthikolamalye sandaidugirom...............
endru puriyumo theriavillai..........
puringindra neram iruvarum ondrai irupoma...........
kaalam enaku kooravillai.........
seekeram purinthugolvaamaga.......
illai endraal kaalam ennai azhaithukolla koodum...........!
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Old 9th June 2008, 11:12 AM
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Default Re: sila kavithaigal ungal paarvaiku

Chitra,

Seems good poem. But can't understand much. Give me a small explanation in English. My Tamil is Palakkad Tamil. kanaka
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hi kanaka...

the first just tells the caring of a husband towards his wife..... like the wasy he helps her in the household chores and the way she smells his presence in the home ..........the way he takes care of her etc...............

the second verse is just the feelings of a lady towards her hubby who is not that much responsive fo her love...........she has written this out of some frustration as he is not that much exposive in his love towards her...........

hope now u can understand my poems...............

Chitra Balachandran........
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Very well. Good poetic leaning. Keep writing in Tamil if possible with a short synopsis. I liked your piece of poem. kanaka
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HI all

this is another one

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thoosi un mel vilunthaal thati viduvathu
erumbu kadithaal athanai nasuki erivathu
kayil irukum azhukinai kazhuvi viduvathu
kuzhanthayin nacharippai kezhaamal irupathu
kadarkarai manalai thati vidum alatchiyam
naan unnai thodugail nazhuvi kollum nee
ivai anaithum onre
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Hi Chitra
Thanks for the meaning of the words...........
A small request to you there is a forum for all the poets like you...........you can post your poems there here is the link for that............
Indian Poems - IndusLadies
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