Way too smart !

Sowmya

Thnx ! it was a story I wrote back in college when i did not take things lightly !
I was enamoured with the idea of how to get along with women ! ( I could never get any girl to look at me )

Santosh

Originally Posted by sowmyapbhat

Hello Uncannybal,

That's a really good story! I particularly liked the theme - trying to create several personae out of a single person! And how it didn't exactly turn out as planned...
Very innovative..

Good going,

Regards,

Sowmya

Santosh,
I also wanted to read psychology...but am not able to...reading this..I think I escaped from that experimenting thing and saved others from being experimented...

If experimenting is not within limits, and used for 'bizarre' things..this will be the end...

accept my wishes on your winning the 1st prize for this story...

sriniketan

corallux

Yes sometimes being too smart and taking a risk with ones feelings is hazardous ! He was looking for a way to get out of his shell and went too far

Santosh

Originally Posted by corallux

Dear Uncannybal,

A very lovely story. Studying psychology is one thing. But getting so involved that you loose your own individuality? That is insane.

For a person like Ravi an introvert who as it is cannot give vent to his feelings, this project cost him his life.

Small wonder that parents tell their kids in a sarcastic tone : Hey don't study too hard else you will end up in an Asylum.

Regards,

Corallux

Mindi

thanx ! That is a huge compliment ! Glad you liked it

Santosh

Originally Posted by Mindian

hi santhosh,

A nice story though very differrent from your usual ones.. enjoyed it nevertheless....so u started out as a very serious writer...and now u are such a versatile one...good for u ...AND ...all of us at IL....

MINDI

dear santosh,

my too many things can jeorpadise the very being of a man, how very true, even the creator has problem understanding us, they say, and here ravi enjoying all bliss at a go, great imagination you have had..and you write with vivid ones too,, sunkan

Hi Uncannybal,

I hope it is just a story not picked form a real incident.
The way you presented it makes me say so.

Anyway A very good piece to read .Congratulations.

Kamalji

Haha u think i ws so smart ???? Thanx yaar

No its just fiction

Santosh

Originally Posted by Kamalji

Dear Santoshbhai,


I think this must be yr life story, having tried out all the roles, and forgetting who u are, are now becoming a writer, albeit a good one.

HAHA.Man someone must examine yr brains to find out where the hell do u get yr ideas from.Wish i had a tenth of yr talent.Great one,man.Keep writing.Regrds.kamal

Janani

Thnx ! Thats a great compliment ! Indeed one should not sacrifice onesself to get anything

Santosh

Originally Posted by Jananikrithsan

That was a real good one, Santosh. Something that he wanted to try out cost him his life You can get interested in people an observe them but it has limits.
Wonderful attempt I must say. You sure rock buddy!!!!

Devika

Thnx ! It is true that one can fall into a trap dug for others. Like somebod hiding something so well they dont even remember where they put it !

Santosh
Devika fan

Originally Posted by Devika Menon

Sometimes you fall into the pit that you have dug for others. Guess thats whats happened here.
Good one here with a moral for SOME too!!

Congratulations on your winning the prize ,Santosh , a little late though but please accept my wishes. Seeing your story dont think they had a tough time in deciding the winner!

Devika

Shanvy

Lovely name. Very true. We must be careful and not play with the heart

Santosh

Originally Posted by shanvy

HI Santhosh,

Belated Congrats on winning the competition.

Experimenting within limits is safer as long as you don't get too involved yourself.