'Jayanthi', A Love Story

hi mithila mam,
very nice narration.i have read all your postings, but my favourite is this post(till now :) )

keep posting more

take care

regards,
sreelata.s

ungal kathaiyaa padikaa aasai aasaiyaa oodi vanthen.. Awesome Mithila

Without even seeing/knowing them, now I have a visual picture of them - The pair would be like Aishwarya and Abishek.. So much elegance and class in that beauty... All from your way of writing...

The thriller was the most heartaching para.. was wishing it would all end well from the first word I read :) :)

your summary... I bow to thy

Dear Mithila maam,
Of all the stories u have posted,this one was really a mind blowing one...I was deep deep deep drowned in this love story.Felt like I was reading Mills n Boons..This really must go for the FP of the month..

Regards
moonbeams..

dear mythila mam,

Very good narration.i enjoyed reading it.THanks for sharing.wonderful.
Now i am also proud to have you as my senior(i also did my graduation in Ethiraj)

Mithila dear,

You've scored again! Congrats .....that was one racy story you gave us.
The reader gets totally involved with all your characters always....as others have also said this one is a class apart definitely.For those of us who are your peers or even nearer it was a special treat because you took us on a fabulous nostalgic trip back to our own college days....the vivid descriptions of clothes and fashion trends that was the rage were all so well brought out. Really Mithila , it is always such a pleasure to read your pieces as it comes from such a spontaneous personality like you.The sympathy and kindness that comes across as you make your observations regarding your characters actually holds up a mirror to your own dear self.The innocence and the affection we all had for our schoolmates or college mates is definitely unique to only that period of our lives.....something to be treasured always.
All the best for more gems to be posted here.
warm regards
PAULINA

Dear Mithila Madam,

Awesome narration! I just couldn't believe that you were very naughty in your college days. I laughed loud reading your mischiefs.

Jayanthi had become heroine of my heart too. You kept my spirit high throughout the post.

"Come and fall in Love" - that is how your love story beckon us.

My Dear Mithila Ma'am,
Your posts always take me down the memory lane.....u made me visualise Jayanthi.....her dimples......u laughing in the class.......OMG......I just thought it was just like our group of 5 girls in our batch......we used to do the same thing.....it was fun ......even I remember, I used to write some boring descriptions of our lecturer with my eyes closed........it was horrible when we wanted to take a nap in the midst of a lecture.....
Even I can visualise the scene when one of our frd got married in 3rd year of BS.....it was all hush hush......because we never thought that a girl could marry at that age.....for us that was the age to have an affair......we also attended the marriage......
Please do send us more and more of ur experience.....its so good to see our back days in ur posts.......
Regards.

Dear Mithila Mam,

wow!!! i read it in one go and your narration is awesome......
I can visualize all the characters,especially Jayanthi with her dimples......
wearing sarees and gng to college.......... it reminds me of seeing some of my mom's college pics where all her friends were in sarees...

Please do keep writing more... its treat to read your posts......

Dear Mithila Kannan,

Another lovely and engaging story from you.
Like everyone else here, it took me also back to my college days and my little group of friends.

Once you said that all this praise you receive here makes your 'fantasy' worthwhile. I wondered. Please please tell me, is this a slice of your own past with some narrative embellishments or is it totally a figment of your very colorful imagination?? Am I prying too much? Let me add hastily, whichever it is, fantasy or fact, it does not make any difference. In the end, the narration captures us without fail! It is just my curious questioning mind which wants to know!!

The way you have described the incidents, Jayanthi and your own actions and reactions are all so real and come alive before the readers' eyes.

A sweet love story Mithila. It just makes us race through the story to know if all ends well. There lies your ability of presenting a simple story with panache. And guess what.....You have once again made it to the FP of the Month!!

L, Kamla

enjoyed reading every word of it!!!!very simple,yet lovely story....read all your other posts too!!!!all are equally wonderful!!!now when ever i see a post from you,i make it a point to read it.