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| Varalotti sir, Your writing made me visualize scene by scene. I liked the particular line which says women needs freedom more than anything. I liked when captain showed his other side by checking with her if Shalini is fine. But what's the use? It will be nice if he shows the same affection when she is normal. Your story has brought in varied personalities of human beings. I enjoyed reading! regards,
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| Dear Sindhuja, Thanks for those nice words. While I do it for all my stories, particularly for this story, I lived scene by scene before I wrote it down on my system. Captain is typical of many elders of the previous generation who can show love only when something is amiss. At that time the other person might even feel irritated to acknowledge that kind of love. And Sindhuja, I am happy and proud to learn that you have become a golden girl with 1000 plus posts. I thought I will take the liberty of congratulating you here in my forum. May you write more and more. May you always remain blessed. regards, |
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| Dear Sridhar I was very touched by these lines. Contrary to what most men are prone to think, a woman’s first need is not . It is not even love. It is freedom - the freedom to be truly herself and true to herself. Currently I am reading, " Standing alone in Mecca" which depicts the struggles and restrictions that are thrust on women. Also like these lines. Very powerful lines, indeed. "Even the vibrant mehendi on her palms had not faded, while her soul did.
__________________ Yesterday is History;Tomorrow is Mystery;Today is a gift, hence called the Present. Story about Sita, the Ayonijai Sita Kalyanam Last edited by sundarusha; 5th July 2008 at 11:42 PM. |
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| Dear Usha, I am happy you liked those lines. I loved writing them. Even my wife found the lines quite fascinating. I have now made SHE into a novel in Tamil and a leading publishing house is planning to bring that out as a kind of pocket novel so that many could buy and read it. "Even the vibrant mehendi on her palms had not faded, while her soul did. I loved these lines quoted by you. regards, Quote:
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