kavidhai kavidhai.........

Dear friends,

Started to write few poems recently. Pls give your feedbacks.

#1
Vidiyal

Adhavanin anbu karangal anaikka,
Nanathudan vilaginal panipen;
Pularnthathu iniya kalai poluthu.

#2
Viyarvai

Nilavil panithuli.............
Enna adhisayam?
Ennavalin mugathil viyarvai.

#3
Maruthani

Idhu margazhi maadham alla.....
Aayinum azhagu kolangalin ninaivalaigal en manaveedhiyil;
O Ennaval maruthani itturukkiral...

#4
Kaadhal

Anbu kanavanae,
Nee enadharugil illai eninum
Un vaasam naan maraven;
Nee adhigam pesa vittalum
Un varthaikal naan ariven;
Dhinamum en kaiyal unavu parimara vittalum
Un rusiyai naan navilven;
Nera niyadigalai naan kadaipidikaa vittalum
Un neranthavaramaiyai naan silagippen;
Nithamum nee ennai anaika vittalum
Un kaadhalai naan unarven;
Maratha nam anbin aanaiyaga
Unaku mun enaduyir thurappen.................

 

Thanks Uma...

 

Thanks ma........ The way you gave feedback impressed me a lot.

 

#6
Aekam

Anbu mazhalaiyae,
Un janipu enaku maru uyir,
Un parvai enaku kaatchi,
Un mozhi enaku vedham,
Un sparisam enaku thendral,
Un punnagai enaku anigalan.................

Anbu mazhalaiyae,
Enathu karuvaraiya nirappa varuvaaya,
Enathu pirapai sirappadaiya seivayaa......
Aengum unadhu thaai...............

 

#7
Muran

Thanathu valiyai marakka ninathu
Innoruvarin valiyai kandaal ethiril...


Tholaikatchiyil azhuthu kondirunthal kathanayaki.....

 

Thanks Mithu... I dont know how to write in tamil font.... Pls help.