21st April 2008, 06:36 PM #1
After a long time I wrote this kavidhai.Try to bear me.........
Thanithu vidappatta poludugalil
ennai unargiren - avai
enake enakkanavi Yarudanum
pagirndu kolla virumbada en
ennangaluku matum urithanavai.........
Thanimayai nesikum vegu silaril
nanum oruthi aam
nan mulgi tholayum nimidangal avai........
En malai thzhium,nila thozhium
aruge irundal innamum
ramyamana tharunangal avai..........
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21st April 2008, 06:44 PM #2
If you can put this in tamil, it will be very nice.
sorry,couldn't enjoy the beautiful poem because of la,zha confusion.
With luv Kamala.
21st April 2008, 07:26 PM #3
I couldnt send it in tamil font from my system.Sorry for the inconvenience.
Originally Posted by vkrithika1
21st April 2008, 08:05 PM #4
Nice poem.. but probably woould have helped if you could have used "zh" instead of "la"... tamizh instead of Tamil..
my humble opinion
keep writing ...
21st April 2008, 08:19 PM #5
Your Poem is very nice.
It is not necessary to be alone at Thanimai. Even if we are in the crowd we can .feel the Thanimai.
Thanimai oru Thandanai.
Thanimai oru Sabam
Thanimai oru vaiyel(Hot)
Thanimai oru vadaikatrru
Thanimai oru Theendamai.
(All are in my view).
22nd April 2008, 10:13 AM #6
Thanks for your reply.Ya most probably used the words correctly.Anyway I correct it in future..........
22nd April 2008, 10:14 AM #7
Hi Viji Mam,
Thanks for your comments.Your views are also good..............
22nd April 2008, 11:06 AM #8
I enjoyed your kavithai.
thanimai oru inimai
thanimaiyilum inimai kaanalam...
22nd April 2008, 03:10 PM #9
Hi Lakshmi Mam,
Thank you for your words!!!Big Laugh
22nd April 2008, 03:54 PM #10
Thanimayulum Inimai kaana mudiyuma is how went the song ...
Yes . Thanimayilum Inimai kaana mudiyum...
especially if you have been used to living alone ... you generally get the feeling of being 'lost out' after quite some time in a crowd of people ..
The feeling of wanting to be back "in your own space" "your thanimai" comes over you .
But in retrospection... is it only for "singles" like me ?
please do write in ...
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