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Discussion in 'Regional Poetry' started by prana, Apr 21, 2008.

  1. prana

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    Hi All,

    After a long time I wrote this kavidhai.Try to bear me.........

    Thanithu vidappatta poludugalil
    ennai unargiren - avai
    enake enakkanavi Yarudanum
    pagirndu kolla virumbada en
    ennangaluku matum urithanavai.........

    Thanimayai nesikum vegu silaril
    nanum oruthi aam
    Bharathiyilum,Bharathidasanilum
    nan mulgi tholayum nimidangal avai........

    En malai thzhium,nila thozhium
    aruge irundal innamum
    ramyamana tharunangal avai..........
     
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    dear prana,

    If you can put this in tamil, it will be very nice.
    sorry,couldn't enjoy the beautiful poem because of la,zha confusion.
     
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    Hi Krithika,

    I couldnt send it in tamil font from my system.Sorry for the inconvenience.

     
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    Bhooma Bronze IL'ite

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    Prana

    Nice poem.. but probably woould have helped if you could have used "zh" instead of "la"... tamizh instead of Tamil..

    my humble opinion

    keep writing ...

    cheers

    Bhooma
     
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    Your Poem is very nice.
    It is not necessary to be alone at Thanimai. Even if we are in the crowd we can .feel the Thanimai.
    Thanimai oru Thandanai.
    Thanimai oru Sabam
    Thanimai oru vaiyel(Hot)
    Thanimai oru vadaikatrru
    Thanimai oru Theendamai.
    (All are in my view).
    viji
     
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    Hi Bhooma,

    Thanks for your reply.Ya most probably used the words correctly.Anyway I correct it in future..........
     
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    Hi Viji Mam,

    Thanks for your comments.Your views are also good..............
     
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    Hi Prana,

    I enjoyed your kavithai.

    thanimai oru inimai
    thanimaiyilum inimai kaanalam...

    Keep writing.

    Cheers,

    Lakshmi.
     
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    Hi Lakshmi Mam,

    Thank you for your words!!!Big Laugh
     
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    Thanimayulum Inimai kaana mudiyuma is how went the song ...

    Yes . Thanimayilum Inimai kaana mudiyum...

    especially if you have been used to living alone ... you generally get the feeling of being 'lost out' after quite some time in a crowd of people ..

    The feeling of wanting to be back "in your own space" "your thanimai" comes over you .

    But in retrospection... is it only for "singles" like me ?

    please do write in ...

    cheers

    Bhooma
     

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