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My attempt at short telugu poetry - the very first one :)

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  1. Sep 25, 2013 #1
    Sai3A21

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    Dear IL buddies,

    this is my very first attempt at telugu short poetry.
    I dont know if it can be called poetry even. But just put into words the thoughts that came to my mind.
    your valuable feedbacks and comments are most welcome :):yes:


    "Nesthama... endaaka nee payanam
    thoduga nenundagaa, aluperugaka saaginchu jeevithapu adhyayanam"

    hope to meet friends with similar interest here...
    c u again with few more...

    Cheers
    Prerna (Sai)
     
    Sai3A21, Sep 25, 2013
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  2. Sep 27, 2013 #2
    Tavishi25

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    Hi prerna
    ur poetry is nice
    Looking forward for more
     
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  3. Sep 29, 2013 #3
    Sai3A21

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    thanks tavishi25... thts so encouraging :thankyou2: Sorry for the delayed reply as I was out of bglr n just returned this noon. yeah will post one more tomorrow
     
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    Sai3A21

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    do u also write short poetry? ur interest made me ask this :)
     
    Sai3A21, Sep 29, 2013
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    Sai3A21

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    "ninu chusina aa kshanamuna, nanu nene marachithini...
    neekai vechina ee samayamuna, kanipinchavenduku???

    nanu nenu maruvakunda undutaka.... leka nanu neevu marichenduku idoka prayatnamaa..."


    Cheers
    Prerna
     
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    kathi chaaku bladu... me prayatnam konasaaguthu kavithala varsham kuripinchali mari.. eppativaraku nenu kavithalu english lo http://www.indusladies.com/forums/poetry/228069-i-will-always-love-your.html thread lo rasukuntu pothunte , me thread choosi manchi idea vachindhi..

    mana telugu vallandharam ikanunchi http://www.indusladies.com/forums/regional-poetry/234748-hehe.html#post2996773 thread lo kavithalu post chesukundham :)
     
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    chaala santhosham littl :goodidea:
    ika nenu na thavikalu akkadae konasaagistha... :clap
     
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    ayyayyo..miru aa kavithala thread ki vasthe ma thavikalu mi kavithala ni thokkesthaayemo..mi kavithala ki ide saraina pradesam n mi thavika la ki aa chotu sreyaskaram..:)
     
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    akkada thavikalu...
    ikkada kavithalu...
    asalu ivi kavithalalaane unnaya???
    frank opinion required pls
     
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    Sai3A21

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    one more kavitha before signing off for the day

    "manasaa o manasaa
    egasipadave ala laa
    karigipove kala laa
    maaripove kaalaanilaa
    maanipove gaayanilaa
    maasipove gyapakaanilaa"

    Cheers
    Prerna
     
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