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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sudharsiniram, Jun 12, 2009.

  1. sudharsiniram

    sudharsiniram Silver IL'ite

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    Life is going crazy, i really do not know why
    i can not build any think just in night
    and love always takes more than a time
    people always swore is of as a phase
    nobody can see it in a perfect chase
    i sense it every time when you come close
    you always make me loose my mind , body and soul

    now too short is too long and i can not be with out you
    wait till you come home cause i can not sleep with out you
    music is too melodic and i can not hear it with out you
    trance is too sugary and i can not sense it with you
    whole globe now know i can be with you
    every thing is too hard to fake and nothing can replace
    but i just can not be with you

    i have a question for myself , even i know the answer
    but i always like to ask it how much you love me
    you gave me strength when i was weak
    you were my voice when i could not speak
    you gave me wings and made me fly
    you hold my hand so i could touch the sky
    you were the one who saw your whole world in me

    now too short is too long and i can not be with out you
    wait till you come home cause i can not sleep with out you
    music is too melodic and i can not hear it with out you
    trance is too sugary and i can not sense it with you
    whole globe now know i can be with you
    every thing is too hard to fake and nothing can replace
    but i just can not be with you

    you have always stayed at every times
    from black to white & from day to dark
    life with out you is dare to imagine
    you have lied and even made me cry
    but you have get down deep in my heart
    you are real and you are for sure
    be with you i can not go any more

    now too short is too long and i can not be with out you
    wait till you come home cause i can not sleep with out you
    music is too melodic and i can not hear it with out you
    trance is too sugary and i can not sense it with you
    whole globe now know i can be with you
    every thing is too hard to fake and nothing can replace
    but i just can not be with you

    I wanna be with you
    i gotta be with you
    i need to be with you
    i want you and only you
    and always want you to want me............
     
  2. Marun

    Marun Platinum IL'ite

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    Nicely written there sudharsini....

    Keep writing. :thumbsup
     
  3. SriVidya75

    SriVidya75 Platinum IL'ite

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    Simplyyyyyy superb and romantic and emotionalBow
     
  4. shivany

    shivany Bronze IL'ite

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    what an outburst of emotions ;poetry excellentae!love shivany
     

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