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Uninvited/ bin bhulaye...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shanvy, Mar 31, 2009.

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  1. Mar 31, 2009 #1
    Shanvy

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    Jaise bin bulaye mehmaan,
    Jaise badal bina barsaat,
    Jaise aandhi bina toofan,
    Jaise bin aahat key maut,
    Jab aate hain leh jaate hain
    Apne pankhon pey bitake,
    Dil aur dadkan dono kho
    Is tarah, humein khabar hi
    Nahi, jab hua pyar,
    Hamari dhadkan unke dil
    Mein sunayi deti hain
    Wah upar waleh, kya kahoon,
    Tumhari khelon khi,
    Sirf maut aur mohabbat,
    Kho milti hai itni izzat,
    Jab aaye bin bulayey
     
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    Shanvy, Mar 31, 2009
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  2. Mar 31, 2009 #2
    Shanvy

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    Re: bin bhulaye...

    (the translation may not do the exact justice but it is here for my friends..)



    Like the uninvited guest,
    Like the rains without clouds,
    Like the gales without storms,
    Liket the silent death
    When it comes, it takes
    The heart and the heartbeat,
    On its wings, never know,
    When it happnened, love,
    When your heartbeat is
    Heard in his heart,
    What shall I say about
    Your creation o lord,
    Only love and death,
    Get the same respect,
    Even when they come
    [FONT=&quot]Without invitation[/FONT]
     
    Shanvy, Mar 31, 2009
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  3. Mar 31, 2009 #3
    Adhithi

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    Dear Shanthi

    When it comes, it takes

    Very true. Your words gave justice to the effects of "Love".

    There is no life without Love and Death, the two inevitable factors in this universe.
    Thank you for the translation.
     
    Adhithi, Mar 31, 2009
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  4. Apr 1, 2009 #4
    Arunarc

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    Wah upar waleh, kya kahoon,
    hamey Shanthi behana ko hamaree paas bhejey, hamey itni aachi kavita key saat.

    Happy journey have a wonderful holidays.
    Waiting for you here to meet you in person[​IMG]
     
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  5. Apr 2, 2009 #5
    Sriniketan

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    Thanks a lot Shanthi for the translation, you really read the pulse of the viewers..like me!

    When it comes..it takes..
    Both love and death...rightly said..

    This is the highlight for this poem and LOVE too!

    sriniketan
     
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  6. Apr 7, 2009 #6
    jaishree9

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    hhi shan buddy
    Itni sunder kavita likhi hai. Kya khub.
    Pyar kya hai - Jab iss ankh ka asu us anh se nikle.
    Jab iss ki sans use pran de.
    Vah pyar hai.
    ( do you need translation ? I dont think..
     
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  7. Apr 7, 2009 #7
    roopanair123

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    wah shanti, kya baat hain.....bahot sundar kavita hain aur meri favourite panktiyya is

    "Is tarah, humein khabar hi
    Nahi, jab hua pyar,
    Hamari dhadkan unke dil
    Mein sunayi deti hain ".......

    wah wah......how romantic !!! :thumbsup
     
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  8. Apr 10, 2009 #8
    mini1kirti

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    Re: very nice

    Dear shanthi
    you wrote very well...n reckon the feelings in lov.
    keep it up
    Mini
     
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  9. Apr 23, 2009 #9
    amallela

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    Too good yaar, keep writing more. It reminds me of my school friends who used to write something like this.
     
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  10. Jun 9, 2009 #10
    Shanvy

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    EQ,

    bahut shukriya. Insha allah hope it happens the other way. we meet when you make it here to chennai.
     
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