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Poem for father

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by cute teddy, Oct 9, 2008.

  1. cute teddy

    cute teddy Bronze IL'ite

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    Hey all,

    This is a small poetry i wrote for my father on his birthday love you papa.​

    Jo kuch aap hamare liye karte aaye ho
    aur jo kuch kar rahe ho

    Mar mar ke jee rahe ho aur
    jee jee kar mar rahe ho

    uska badla hum mein se koi
    chahkar bhi nahi chuka payega

    Jab inke sir par aayegi tab
    inki samajh mein aayega

    Kitna mushkil hai, ek pati, ek baap ek bete aur
    Ek ache jawai ka farz ek sath nibhana

    Kitna kathin hota hai, jeewan mein baar baar
    ansuon ke ghut pi jaana

    Mujhe is baat ki khusi hain aur is baat par garv hai
    ki aapke sath bitaya hua har din, mere liye ek parv hai,
    Dusro ki galtiyon ko maaf karte aaye ho.

    aur maaf karte jate ho yehi karan hai ki is pari var ki gaadi ko dhakel paye ho.
    aur aaj bhi dhakelte jate ho


    aant mein bas itna hi kahungi, bahut choti hu, karti hu anurudh,
    mujhe yaad kar, jab bhi aaye pee jana aap apna krodh.
    :)
     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello cute teddy
    looks like a first attempt of your poem.
    My Dear Father never forgets his kids, so there is no question of protesting and telling him you remember me that is mujhe yaad kar.
    It was wellwritten
    Keep writting more.................
     
  3. sonasanju

    sonasanju Silver IL'ite

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    HI Cute teddy
    That was wonderful...Daddy's are the best !!!!
    I love my father the most!!!
    Well writen...

    Thanks for sharing...

    Cheers
    Sona
     
  4. regi_sr

    regi_sr New IL'ite

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    Cute one fathers are always great keep it up

    I LOVE MY DAD
     

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