Close [X]
LOG IN
Close [X]
PLEASE LOG IN OR REGISTER

Sorry, you need to be a registered member and logged in to access this page.
Please login or register below.

REGISTER

It's easy, quick and FREE!



  1. #1
    AnshuSinha's Avatar
    AnshuSinha is offline Junior ILite
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    City
    Hong Kong
    State
    HK
    Country
    China
    Posts
    148

    Default Hindi poem..I wrote..Baarish

    Yeh barish ka mausam.....
    Yeh dil ka machalna..........
    kash hota yeh tufaan.......
    na aate hum bahar........

    fir kambal mein hoti lambi neend........
    maja aata itna dil jata bhar......
    magar kyon hoga aisa.........
    kyonki maine jo chaha........

    Yeh barish ka mausam.......
    hai sawan sa mausam....
    na hota koi kaam......
    kash ek din aisa hota......


    Rehte Adam aur Eve......
    barasta ishwar ka vardaan......
    aata sab kuch jholi mein.....
    bin maange....bin khate.........

    kash hota aisa.........
    yeh barish ka mausam........

    I dont know how u like it but I wrote it when I was simply writing an email...may be I need to improve on it...


    -Anshu

  2. #2
    Arunarc's Avatar
    Arunarc is offline IL Hall Of Fame Greeter
    Forum Moderator
    Join Date
    Sep 2007
    City
    Thane
    State
    Maharastra
    Country
    India
    Posts
    11,683

    Default Re: Hindi poem..I wrote..Baarish

    Hi Anshu
    Excellent poem.
    You have put in the words very beautifully. enjoyed reading your barish ka mausam.........
    Ya we feel like to sleep for long time and sit in the gallery and watch the rains with something hot chatpatta to eatBig Laugh
    If we start getting everything before asking then how will you enjoy the life. I enjoyed rains when I came to India this time during july and august it was too much but still better then not having rains at all which I don't get to see here in Egypt.



    The purpose of our lives is to be happy. We can live without religion and meditation, but we cannot live without human affection.

    Answering Marathon - Part 3


  3. #3
    Geetha Iyer is offline Guest
    Join Date
    Apr 2008
    City
    Mumbai
    State
    Maharashtra
    Country
    India
    Posts
    385

    Default Re: Hindi poem..I wrote..Baarish

    Quote Originally Posted by AnshuSinha View Post
    Yeh barish ka mausam.....
    Yeh dil ka machalna..........
    kash hota yeh tufaan.......
    na aate hum bahar........

    fir kambal mein hoti lambi neend........
    maja aata itna dil jata bhar......
    magar kyon hoga aisa.........
    kyonki maine jo chaha........

    Yeh barish ka mausam.......
    hai sawan sa mausam....
    na hota koi kaam......
    kash ek din aisa hota......


    Rehte Adam aur Eve......
    barasta ishwar ka vardaan......
    aata sab kuch jholi mein.....
    bin maange....bin khate.........

    kash hota aisa.........
    yeh barish ka mausam........

    I dont know how u like it but I wrote it when I was simply writing an email...may be I need to improve on it...
    Nice poem. I enjoyed it. Only Mumbaikars can enjoy the mansoon. I see that whenever first mansoon rain comes every one gets to the streets and want to get wet while dancing with the belief that doind so will immunise health for the rest of mansoon season. Here is my additional lines to your poem.

    yeh barish ka mausam
    gharam pakora ka mausam
    yeh barish ka mausam
    rishthadoron ke saath judneka mausam

    yeh barish ka mausam
    baadalon ka rangeela mausam
    yeh barish ka mausam
    bhoond bhoond se bharish
    kidikionme ghir ke
    sangeeth denewala mausam

    Please excuse me if my Hindi is not pure.

    Regards,

    Geetha Iyer


  4. #4
    uthra's Avatar
    uthra is offline Junior ILite
    Join Date
    Jun 2007
    City
    singapore
    State
    singapore
    Country
    Singapore
    Posts
    83

    Default Re: Hindi poem..I wrote..Baarish

    great one ! brings the rainy climate before the eyes

    uthra

  5. #5
    AnshuSinha's Avatar
    AnshuSinha is offline Junior ILite
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    City
    Hong Kong
    State
    HK
    Country
    China
    Posts
    148

    Default Re: Hindi poem..I wrote..Baarish

    Thanks a lot guys for the appreciation.
    Could not respond earlier as I went to India for Durga puja.Just came back today.

    Anshu

    -Anshu

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
All times are GMT +5.5. The time now is 06:16 PM.

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163 164 165 166 167 168 169 170 171 172 173 174 175 176 177 178 179 180 181 182 183 184 185 186 187 188 189 190 191 192 193 194 195 196 197 198 199 200 201 202 203 204 205 206 207 208 209 210 211 212 213 214 215 216 217 218 219 220 221 222 223 224 225 226 227 228 229 230 231 232 233 234 235 236 237 238 239 240 241 242 243 244 245 246 247 248 249 250 251 252 253 254 255 256 257 258 259 260 261 262 263 264 265 266 267 268 269 270 271 272 273 274 275 276 277 278 279 280 281 282 283