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Clad in Brown

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Poetlatha, Sep 29, 2015.

  1. Poetlatha

    Poetlatha Platinum IL'ite

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    Here comes the marching band
    Clad in Brown
    Marching to the tune of the Wind
    One behind the other beautifully lined
    Crossing the street
    Parading in the intersections
    Staging in the center
    Dancing to the music
    Circling and waltzing
    Twisting and turning
    Zigzagging and Rustling
    Always at this time of the year!


    Poetlatha
     
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  2. sreeram

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    Nicely written. Congrats.
     
  3. Poetlatha

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    :) Thanks dear friend!
     
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    Nice one Latha.
     
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    Very nice poetlatha..
     
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    @sreeram,@jskls,@Rith, dear friends thanks for reading my poem and encouraging! At this time of the year, iam always thrilled to drive around,to see the fallen leaves having fun! Parading, dancing, and enjoying the freedom and liberty attained. Muthi vandhal, manam santhoshathil adukindradhu!
     
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    I felt that you were talking about fall leaves and not the actual band in brown.
     
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    @jskls : you are absolutely right! I was talking about the fall leaves and then personified their lives with liberty to Mukthi for them too!
     
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