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  1. May 28, 2015 #1
    Scorpio707

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    Still are the leaves….
    Dry is the air…
    Barren is the ground…
    Finding water is rare…
    With no animals anywhere….
    Vision gets blur…
    Throat very soar…
    Deaf are the ears…
    Lips cracking showing pores,
    With heavy feet you can’t walk anymore…
    There is no life in sight…
    Sun is scorching bright…
    Soon you will be out of mind…
    Way out is not easy to find…
    Food is scarce, with one just one tinned can…
    Isolated, you find yourself in “No Man’s Land”.
     
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    GoogleGlass

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    nice one S7

    (the land of women is always a problem) :):):)
     
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    Scorpio707

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    Hahahah...land of just only "men" too trust me won't be any less...:-D
     
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    GG.. Land of 'only' woman will be interesting.
    Men'.. I wish they know that they are in 'No Man's Land' :)

    Nice one S7. My lips parched literally reading your poem. Had to gulp a few glasses of water...:)
     
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    Scorpio707

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    Chillout! now :)
     
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    Lathasv

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    Hi Meenu :)
    good one... Did you get inspiration from Summer?
     
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    Good S7 !

    Sure if we make earth as "no trees land" , then no man's land is not far distant...
     
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    Scorpio707

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    Almost you can say :)...was standing out in the balcony of my room...and I drafted this one :-D Thanks Latha....
     
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    I didn't give it such a serious thought...but true what you said Pavithra....thanks
     
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    Just 30 minutes ago came from walk.. It is hot outside here too... I saw your post and felt like that..:)
     
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