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Couplet : Let us start writing, A poem with two lines that rhymes!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Poetlatha, May 25, 2015.

  1. Poetlatha

    Poetlatha Platinum IL'ite

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    Friends please join me in writing Couplets : I'm posting here my poem with couplets. Just one Couplet is enough too...please write....

    A Tribute to Mother Nature

    I love nature for its beauty
    To save and preserve is my duty

    The grandeur of its mountains
    The freshness of the fountains

    Natural little springs
    Cool pleasant water it brings

    Of which my heart sings
    To the music of the bird's chirping

    Happy Earth Day
    For it's your 40th Birthday

    Mother Nature I shall cherish
    And make you flourish

    In whatever possible little ways
    May the God's bless me with Fays

    To protect the greenery
    And create the ever green scenery!
     
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    Poetlatha Platinum IL'ite

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    @periamma, @jskls, @pavithra, @vanithasudhir, @google glass, @rgsrnivasan, @kanits....and others please join...let us rock and roll....with words...in the form of couplets....
     
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  3. kaniths

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    Just tagging rightly.... @VanithaSudhir @GoogleGlass @PavithraS @rgsrinivasan
     
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    thanks @Kaniths ...avasaram post panninane...appreciate your help. where is your couplet dear friend.....
     
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    kaniths IL Hall of Fame

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    Couplets? Me? Enaku poems varathey?! :roll:
     
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    In Silence, I take an oath
    Better shall I make the Earth!

    :spin Yennaleye mudila!!
     
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    periamma IL Hall of Fame

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    when you stumpled I was there to hold you
    when I stumple no one near to hold me
     
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    You showered love like a mom,
    And shielded me from any harm.

    You rejoiced whenever I did,
    Something small. I loved that!

    You always spoke kind words
    And so great are your deeds.

    I followed you like a shadow
    Happily basked in your glow.

    Took your advise and grew
    My own identity thats new!

    You were with me always, yes!
    I wouldn't have settled for less!

    One fine day you left me!
    I felt so raged like the sea.

    "Unfair!", I shouted and cried.
    How insane and stupid was I?

    You never said about your illness.
    It ate you, you wished my wellness.

    "Am really proud of you my dear!
    I will be with you always, here!"

    Thats what you'll say, I know.
    Thats why am crying, you know?

    Sorry @Poetlatha for a different one this time - this is a continuous one.
    Earlier, I made a brave attempt to translate a few ThirukkuraL couplets that I liked, to four liners in english. Hoping this sounds good. -rgs
     
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    Disclaimer: not following any couplet rules/this is just a blabber - not about me
    என் எண்ணங்களில் சிறை கொண்ட உன்னிடம்
    கண்களில் சிறைபடவே ஆசை

    உன் கண்களில் சிறைபடா விட்டாலும் என்னை
    எழுத்தக்களிலாவது கைது செய்
     
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    wow there you go my dear friend! Good one! Yavullavu azhamana karuthu, sindanai....wonderful depth!
     

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