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Heart Valve/Value...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by GoogleGlass, May 6, 2015.

  1. GoogleGlass

    GoogleGlass IL Hall of Fame

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    Heart Valve/Value...

    Is there a heart in you
    Is there a me in you
    Is there valve in it
    Is it faulty per se

    Faulty it was so
    Love unabated then
    Hatred unabated now
    Flow of both not restricted
    Flooding is drowning the me in me
    Non-Return valve it seems and am not
    Going to return having lost all that Value...
     
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  2. VanithaSudhir

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    GG Again !!

    How about a pacemaker ? Like ROI.. ROV
     
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    அன்பிற்கும் உண்டோ அடைக்குந்தாழ் ஆர்வலர்
    புன்கணீர் பூசல் தரும்
    - was reminded of this kural... sorry to quote tirukkural in your english poetry
     
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