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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, May 5, 2015.

  1. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Let me tell you something now.
    I can't behave like someone else,
    No matter how hard I try, love.
    Thats important than anything else.

    I can't be acting nice
    To just please your eyes.
    You know me. Don't you?
    I am one of those few

    Who find it easy to just be.
    I may have faults. Yes, I agree.
    I have good things too! You see!
    Its your choice to decide upon me.

    I can't be away from you any day,
    I wish to walk with you for long,
    Sharing all, good or bad and play
    Pranks with you and hear your songs.

    I can't just be able to say,
    How much I love you any day.
    If I were to, my love will be
    Past, which I don't want or pray.

    I don't want to influence you
    In your decision whatever it is.
    Give it a thought and come anew.
    I can't just wait. Answer me please!
     
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  2. VanithaSudhir

    VanithaSudhir Platinum IL'ite

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    So.. was this posted and did you get an answer :)
    Good one RGS :)
     
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  3. jskls

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    Waiting is thrilling isn't it? Good one RGS
     
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    satchitananda IL Hall of Fame

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    Very nicely written RGS. Very honest and straight from the heart.
     
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  5. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Its on the contrary VanithaSudhir. I don't like to explain myself generally, unless when needed. :) Thanks for your quick feedback and appreciation. -rgs
     
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  6. rgsrinivasan

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    Depends on which end you are, @jskls.
    And waiting without a time-frame is something terrible. Thanks for your feedback. -rgs
     
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  7. rgsrinivasan

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    Surprised to see your like and feedback here, Satchi. Thanks for your appreciation. -rgs
     
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    Lathasv IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice poem on open hearted person.:) it very difficult to find that kind of person in real world.
     
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  9. satchitananda

    satchitananda IL Hall of Fame

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    RGS, agreed, I have not come here in ages or to any forum regularly for a while now. But I always appreciate your poetry.
     
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    Nice one and hope you got your answer.
     
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