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Dear Daughter

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by lakshmi13, May 4, 2015.

  1. lakshmi13

    lakshmi13 Gold IL'ite

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    You are still a little girl
    But soon you will grow.
    There are lots I need to tell you
    And lots you should know.

    Remember you are special
    And will always be.
    Though now you are my daughter
    Soon you'll be a friend to me.

    Life is not easy
    But its not difficult too..
    I am sure you will succeed
    If you remain as "You".

    Success does not always* mean
    Riches, parties or fleet of cars.
    In fact, it is the wealth of smiles
    You gather during happy hours.

    Success has no meaning
    If no true friends are by your side,
    If you are lonely at heart
    Or have things to hide.

    Live a life to its fullest
    Not because you have to.
    Life lived well is really one
    When you truly want to.

    It is better to be remembered
    By people, even if few.
    For all the good you have done
    And for their joys due to you.

    There will be heartbreaks and sorrow
    Thats how works the wheel of life.
    It is up to you
    To find peace amidst strife.

    The dark clouds will only stay
    If you don't let them pass.
    Have faith and keep moving
    Remember, there's no empty glass.

    No matter whatever happens
    Remember you will cope.
    Only thing you need then
    Is oodles of hope.

    There is no need
    To be always prim and proper.
    Let your hair down once in a while
    Be your own life's chauffer.

    People will always advice
    You to do this or that.
    Hear them out with patience
    But in the end follow your heart.

    You will make mistakes
    No need to aim for perfection.
    Whats the point in living
    When there is nothing for introspection.

    There are so many more
    I have to share with you.
    But let me take a break
    With the words -"I love you".
     
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  2. jskls

    jskls IL Hall of Fame

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    Wonderful Lakshmi. So much words of wisdom to share when so young. I am spellbound. When I am still looking at the skies for a sign from my mother your poem seems to be my answer. Your daughter is so blessed to be your child. Well written.
     
  3. Harini73

    Harini73 Platinum IL'ite

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    @lakshmi13,

    Wonderful poem.

    There are so many more
    I have to share with you.
    But let me take a break
    With the words -"I love you".

    Beautiful words
     
  4. vibimolu

    vibimolu Senior IL'ite

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    Such a wonderful poem... Truly impressed :)
     
  5. Lathasv

    Lathasv IL Hall of Fame

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    @lakshmi13
    excellent poem:)
    people always advice but follow your heart ..
    every line is true .. Thank you for Sharing
     
  6. Poetlatha

    Poetlatha Platinum IL'ite

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    Wonderful poem, well expressed, so many lines are beautifully penned. Words of wisdom is flowing from the fountain within you! Enjoyed thoroughly and will re-read several times for inspiration and comfort!
     

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