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  1. Apr 28, 2015 #1
    Scorpio707

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    All through the night I have not slept,
    Thinking of you I silently wept,
    What I heard was that true??
    My mind is blank and I feel so blue….
    Is this all that is left of us??
    Wish we had not fallen in love and made so much fuss….

    I know now well that nothing can be done,
    I have to let go of you and be done….
    Heart is full of mixed emotions,
    In the last few years we have been together in so many situations…
    But none of them has been this hard,
    Life has now taught me a lesson…

    ‘It’s not good to be so good’ was a phrase I heard when young,
    Never believed in this and made fun…
    Wish I would get answers to all my questions…
    Why did I not pay heed to elder’s suggestions…
    You came into my life and made it so bright…
    Now you have switched off the light…

    We fell in love crazily,
    Without knowing that we are not meant to be…
    Life was once sweet and thus we sailed,
    Now it’s wrecked and life has failed…
    I think of you all night and day…
    Why are you so far away….

    It’s been days since I heard from you,
    How I wish this phase was not true..
    You were the best thing that happened to me,
    Now this separation is shattering me…
     
    Scorpio707, Apr 28, 2015
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  2. Apr 28, 2015 #2
    GoogleGlass

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    Separation is a preparation for a poem full of pain for S7 :)

    Nice one S7 - not painstaking efforts as it comes naturally to you but a pain inflicting one...
     
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    Distance increases love isn't it? Good one on separation Scorpio707. .its not good to be so good was very good.....
     
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    Very nice poem on painful seperation. Wish the seperation never happened..
     
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    GG.. Long Time no See !!!!!!!
     
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    @scorpio707
    very painful to be separated . Unite them in your next poem :)
     
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    Scorpio707

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    LOL....GG remember the "Yet to post folder" ?? this one is from that kitty :mrgreen:
     
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    Scorpio707

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    I can never forget that line "It's not......" heard it in school...never understood it then unlike now :) ...thanks jskls
     
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    Scorpio707

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    Thanks CP....yeah don't we all want happy endings :wink: ...but how can there be love without pain right ??
     
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    Scorpio707

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    hahahha....sure lathasv....thanks
     
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