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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Apr 27, 2015.

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    You are here forever, kind to stay,
    Greeting anyone who comes to you.
    Some get bold and indulge in play.
    Some giggle and afraid are a few.

    You wear many robes in a day.
    Black, dark green and a gentle blue,
    And many kinds of grayish hue,
    And a lovely shade of dark blue

    Are what I've seen so far on you.
    And impressed yes, on seeing you
    Anytime; won't get tired of you.
    Every time, you look good and new.

    Gigantic ships and small boats lie
    As crawling insects in a moving plane
    Of glass whose vastness is mostly seen,
    Not your depth, which has not been seen.
     
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    Just in continuation with the above post:
    There are a few that one can see,
    As far as he or she could yet,
    Can't see fully. The best is the sea
    Which is what I wrote about. Like it?
     
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    Good one RGS. Just came back spending huge amount of me time on the Sea Shore and I exactly knew what you were saying ... I wrote ocean of thoughts in Snippets section
     
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    Thanks Jskls, for your appreciation. I read half of it and could not read beyond that, because of lack of time. I used to read at one go normally. Will read and respond to that, for sure. -rgs
     

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