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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Apr 16, 2015.

  1. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    There are times we hugged,
    Some times when we fought,
    Calling each other names, yes,
    Reconciling faster than other lot.

    There are times we knew what
    Each of our likes and dislikes are.
    Some we agreed, some we mocked,
    But always we never went too far.

    There are those times when we stood
    For each other and it felt so right.
    Those are the times, we felt so good,
    Our relationship reached new heights.

    But all those times, we've always been
    Together dear and now I hate,
    This time when being without you. "Mean"
    Is only how I describe fate.
     
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    Beautiful !
     
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    Love this poem! Looking forward to read more! :)
     
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  4. rgsrinivasan

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    Thanks Sreeb3007, for your feedback. Happy to receive a first from you here. -rgs
     
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    Thanks Divya332, for your appreciation. Happy to receive a first from you. -rgs
     
  6. jskls

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    good one RGS.

    சேர்ந்து வாழ்ந்த அனைவருமே சேர்ந்து போவதில்லை....
     
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    True Jskls. Thanks for your appreciation. -rgs
     
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    it's high time, no thanks please.... & hope u don't mind
     
  9. rgsrinivasan

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    Its always good to use thanks and sorry, Jskls, in my humble opinion and experience. Besides, out of so many who read my posts and don't post any feedback, you are one of a few, who provide them frequently. The thanks is meant specially for that. And I hope you are not offended by that. -rgs
     
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    Oh people get offended by my use of thanks and sorry. We write without illakkanam just urainadai. But yours have edugai Monai and/or poetic phenomenon. Though tamil is not my mother tongue I love tamil poetry. So kandippa unga kavithaigal sets a standard here which we will not miss. Also please use the @ before the username so that I will get notification. Else I will miss ur comments.
     
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