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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sreeb3007, Apr 13, 2015.

  1. sreeb3007

    sreeb3007 Silver IL'ite

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    I can't promise you that

    I will bring you shining stars
    or the glowing moon

    I can't promise you that
    our life will be a rainbow
    with multiple colors always

    I can't promise you that
    this world will bend in front of you
    and shower on you with lots of praises and blessings

    But..

    I can promise you that
    I will be there for you always
    and forever...
    throughout your entire life..

    I can promise you that
    I will be your shining star
    I will be your glowing moon
    I will be your colorful rainbow
    And...
    I will be your entire world !

    I can promise you that
    I will listen to you
    I will talk to you
    I will play with you
    I will fight with you
    I will kiss you
    I will hug you
    I will be there in your good and bad times
    in your happiness and sorrows..
    in every breathe you take
    in every second you spend
    in every moment.. all your lifetime !

    I can promise you that

    I will love you and always keep loving you!

    - SreeB
     
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  2. TypicalLady

    TypicalLady Senior IL'ite

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    superb:thumbsup
     
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  3. sreeb3007

    sreeb3007 Silver IL'ite

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  4. Lathasv

    Lathasv IL Hall of Fame

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    @ sreeb3007
    nice poem. :) is this your first poem here? Keep continue to write . All the best
     
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    MyselfandI Silver IL'ite

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    nice one, thanks for sharing
     
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  6. sreeb3007

    sreeb3007 Silver IL'ite

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    @Lathasv

    Hi Lathasv,

    Thanks a lot :) Yes, my first poem here in IL site ..thanks once again, sure I'll keep writing :)

    - Sree
     
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    sreeb3007 Silver IL'ite

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    @MyselfandI

    Hello,

    Thanks a lot :)

    - Sree
     
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    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

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    Sree...nice and sweet...
     
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    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice start with a tender note, Sree.
    All the very best to you! Post more! -rgs
     
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    :wow:wow:wow:wow:wow
     
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