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  1. Apr 9, 2015 #1
    jasmine25

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    You are my sunshine
    And now our son shines

    You are my moonlight
    Our son is a delight

    You are a Busy-bee
    Our son is a Honey-bee

    You are a sweetie-pie
    Our son is a cutie-pie

    You are a mystic
    Our son is a magic

    You are my world
    Our son is my Universe :p

    note : this is my first ever poem in my lifetime.. (Got inspired by our scorpio madam)
    excuse me for errors if any..
     
    jasmine25, Apr 9, 2015
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  2. Apr 9, 2015 #2
    GoogleGlass

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    Nice start jaz

    Son shines as the sun
    Poem shines as the moon
    24/7 it is bright at home :)
     
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    jskls

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    Great inspiration and Great start... write more. remembered the song "You are my sunshine...my little sunshine"
     
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    Scorpio707

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    Jasmine :-D ,

    How lovely....way to go...keep writing :2thumbsup:
     
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    Harini73

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    Hi,

    Nice one and keep trying.:2thumbsup:
     
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    rgsrinivasan

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    Nice one Jasmine. Happy to read. Best wishes to your kid and to your family as well. -rgs
     
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    jasmine25

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    Thank you GG.. Such a nice reply poem :)
     
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    jasmine25

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    Thank you so much jskls for your support and encouragement :)
     
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    jasmine25

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    Thanks Scorpio..My little one is not letting me move away from him even for a minute.. I get time only when he sleeps..so I think keep writing is unimaginable task as of now.. Am already going Witsend
     
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    jasmine25

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    Thanks harini :)
     
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