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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Mar 30, 2015.

  1. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Every grain of sand
    In this vast seashore
    Reminds you as I stand
    Alone now, my eyes pour!

    Each conch that I take
    To my ear, says your name.
    I now lost all my stakes
    Henceforth will remain the same.

    This is where we met last,
    You ran in to the water fast.
    I raced too, but you went past.
    You won then, now I'm lost.

    Someone's presence is at best
    Known in the absence, I know.
    What I don't know is just
    When you'll come back, you know?

    In the gentle drizzle that pours,
    In the evening sun that shines,
    In the rainbow that just soars,
    I see you. You are always mine!

    There may come a day when
    I go to that point where
    The sky and earth join! Then
    I will be with you, for sure!
     
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    "Someone's presence is at best
    Known in the absence, I know."

    Good one rgs.. It takes irony to learn life.
     
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    Meeting and Parting is the saddest part of human life..
    Feeling melancholic.. :|
     
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    Thanks for your quick like and feedback Jskls. Happy to receive your support. -rgs
     
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    There are a few core feelings, which everyone tries to phrase, how much ever times, VanithaSudhir and each time they come up with something new to enrich it further. Thanks for your feedback and like. -rgs
     
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