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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by jskls, Mar 2, 2015.

  1. jskls

    jskls IL Hall of Fame

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    Days go by without talking to you
    Months go by without hearing your voice
    Years go by without seeing your face
    Not a single moment goes by
    Without thinking about you.


    Only question the day I see you
    - Why this hurry dad?
     
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  2. rgsrinivasan

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    Short and nice one Jskls. With a touching note in the end as well!

    I don't know why you have to leave,
    Making me alone, my dear father!
    "God is kind!", you said, I believed!
    I doubt that only say of yours rather.

    Where are you dad?
    What are you doing?
    I am still sad.
    Not yet out of mourning.

    You gave me words,
    You showed me how.
    You left like a bird,
    Am all alone now!

    Snow disappears when sun is up,
    Darkness goes when light comes.
    I will be bold and keep my chin up,
    As you taught. I too am bold some.

    -rgs
     
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    @rgs sWonderful one .. Thanks
     
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    very touching,,,,,
     
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    short but lasting emotions... nice one
     
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    @g3sudha, @GoogleGlass - Thank you
     
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    @jskls - Short one, but very meaningful....
     
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    very nice.....
     
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    Thank you @scorpio707, @SaranyaShanmuga
     
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    a little bit expanded version

    Days go by without talking to you
    Months go by without hearing your voice
    Years go by without seeing your face
    Not a single moment goes by
    Without thinking about you though
    You left in a hurry

    Last time we met still in my thoughts
    Last time we spoke still ring in my ears
    Last time I saw your hand still in my eyes
    Still you left in a hurry

    Your coat still in my closet
    Your footwear still in my house
    Your handwritten sloka notes still in my pooja
    And you left in a hurry

    Only question the day I see you - Why this hurry dad?
     

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