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My Love!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Dec 26, 2014.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    I won't be crying for days dear!
    I won't be this crestfallen too!
    Believe me! You don't have to fear!
    I won't contemplate suicide too!

    I can't even imagine myself,
    Growing a beard. Its rubbish!
    Like a needle kept in the topmost shelf,
    This'll stay. I'll pretend to be selfish!

    Perhaps I realize now how it is,
    To live as a shadow of oneself!
    No joy, no grief can anymore please
    Me, and they are running themselves!

    Living in the past can only happen
    To some people who are old, I thought!
    Now I realize that its all wrong when
    I experience this! There is still a lot!

    You don't have to contact me again!
    Don't even think about me, dear!
    I am out of sight, so out of your mind,
    Is what I wish to happen here!

    My last moment will be just as grand,
    As I would be thinking about you!
    That drop of tear you shed shall stand,
    Far beyond all my life! I tell you!
     
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  2. suryakala

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    Dear RGS,

    A truly touching and beautiful poem on the 'love lost'.

    It brings back to my mind a couple of lines some where I read

    " Full many a flower blossom in the wild
    Unseen to die leaving a fragrance sweet and mild'.

    Thanks for sharing.
     
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    Lovely lines those, Suryakala.
    Thanks a lot for your appreciation and sharing those. -rgs
     
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    oh my goodness, such a lovelllly poem rgs...
     
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    Thanks Pallavi, for your like and appreciation. -rgs
     

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