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Doing a thing is the fairest ever...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by GoogleGlass, Nov 27, 2014.

  1. GoogleGlass

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    Doing a thing is the fairest ever...

    Nothing is for ever
    Nothing is fair ever
    Good or bad keeps happening
    Facing that cheerfully is learning
    It is a game that is played around you
    A spectator or a player being the choice unto you
    Unfair to remain just a spectator and be blown away
    Fair to play instead win or lose playing the game is the way
    Nothing is for ever nothing is fair ever doing a thing is the fairest ever...
     
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  2. MadhuSharmila

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    GG,

    Loved reading it... Your poem made me to post a comment rather than being a silent reader.(The impact!!!)

    Loved these lines very much - 'Nothing is fair ever'.
     
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    silently reading.....ll not give u like n comment
     
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    madhuprabha Gold IL'ite

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    Good afternoon Googleglass,
    Lovely poem. It is a true reflection of life as it is today. and I fully agree with you on the following line.
    " Nothing is for ever nothing is fair ever doing a thing is the fairest ever..."

    In this life we just have to do what has to be done and remember that God is there is take care of the rest.
     
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    thanks for the first fb MS - 2594 posts - you are not definitely a silent reader :):):)
     
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    you have been here and this is the proof - thanks uma :)
     
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    deepthiraj Platinum IL'ite

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    Good or bad keeps happening
    Facing that cheerfully is learning...
    Superb GG:thumbsup
    Nice one.. :))
     
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    thank you MP - doing a thing is the fairest ever :)
     
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    nice poem GG. what is this style of poem called where word count increases after every sentence?
     
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    :wink: GG style Padma :)))
     
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