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  1. Oct 1, 2014 #1
    Scorpio707

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    Been a year now since we met...
    Strange, time seems to have won it's bet...
    Devastated was I a year ago...
    Renewed, peaceful and solemn
    Am I now for sure...

    Dream, destiny or miracle, you
    May call that to be...lasted a
    Short while, before it was washed away
    For good, I must thank the almighty...
    Went on a roller coaster ride feeling
    All the thrills and high...but came down
    Crashing with just seconds left to survive...

    Love and luck, are like partners in 'Crime'
    As it sticks and gets older taster like 'Wine'
    Memories whether sweet or sour...
    Were once moments shaped out of love...
    Far away and out of sight are you from me...
    Yes, at times heart aches to see thee...
    But wonder what purpose meeting would serve...
    We have long before severed ties and now
    Known to all as 'Foes'

    Tempting fate is what we have seen...
    Playing games unknown and unseen....
    Like a start and end point that exists...
    We sustained long and hard...until we
    Were caught in the 'Mist'
     
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  2. Oct 1, 2014 #2
    rgsrinivasan

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    Nice one. Just a small doubt Scorpio.
    Line 5 - "Am I know for sure..."
    Is that meant to be "Am I now for sure..."?
    Sorry if I am wrong. -rgs
     
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    Rusty relationship turns misty, should see to that it doesn't turn murky...

    Nice one S7.
     
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    Scorpio707

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    RGS..yes,sorry it was a typo error..thanks for pointing that out..
     
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    GG :thankyou2: ....
     
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    typos are resultant of inability to control emotions :)
     
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    GG, A heady person justifies the cause of the typo here?
    Sounds interesting!

    Scorpio - Sorry for intrusion. -rgs
     
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    GoogleGlass

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    Ha ha ha

    RGS - am motivating her to release the emotions unabated :)

    a heady!!!!! no way buddy :)
     
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    Scorpio707

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    GG...giving me a taste of my own medicine ah;-) ...how can I debate with someone who spoke about 'Krimibhojanam" surrendersmiley
     
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    Emotions Unabated...LOL...I'm just wondering can that be the 'Title' for my next post now :)
     
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