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Out of sight....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Scorpio707, Sep 30, 2014.

  1. Scorpio707

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    Wonder if ever you will know,
    What you mean to me...
    Wonder if ever you will know,
    How much I love you...
    Out of sight is out of mind..
    Is what all say...but
    If you ask me I would say..
    We have come a very long way....
    I know you are inside me still
    I know you once wished me goodwill...
    Our paths have changed unexpectedly...
    All that begins would one day end...
    Though you & I did not that foresee...
    People around may make fun of me...
    Laugh and kid seeing me...
    Little do they know...how much
    I loved you and once lived for thee....
    Falling in love with you was written in my fate...
    Glad that I could just for once...
    Make you feel...before it was too late...
    I will live in peace and think of you always...
    Never will I let myself be disgraced...


     
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    Nice one s7.

    out of mind isn't out of sight truly - when it is in mind how can it be out of mind?

    Is it a repeat of earlier one or on those lines another one?

    If yes not out of my mind if no then yours is sure out of mind :)
     
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    GG...5 mind's in your comments:)....wrote this couple of months back, but wonder why I didn't post it...and nope it's not a repeat of my previous..told you I'm currently emotion/senti dead, and have to :bonkfor all the new ones..
     
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    5 minds and am not out of mind yet - I am S7 :)

    ESP - I thought I read this earlier from you - 5 months is again too far back :):):)
     
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    No wonder - the "Aching" and "My Love for you" had the similar emotions running and draining you...
     
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    When I think and write on 'LOVE' and 'LOST' topics it's fun GG...it's free-flow of words :) emotions yeah similar you can say...but gosh are they not sad and depressing, my poems ;-) when I read them again it's draining :rotfl
     
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