Initially, I stood hard like a rock, That withstood just any weather. In fact you never gave me a shock, To change me overnight too, rather. As rain washes away the dirt And cools the mountains, you Drove my inhibition from the start, And I started thinking about you. You were patient like a diluted Acid that corrodes metal slowly. I was slowly but surely fixated On you then and shivered deeply. Like a salt that is partially Soluble, I was in two minds then. Your persona but then beautifully Changed it sometime, I know not when! Now I lie like sugar crystals dissolved, In water, where others see only you. I am there for sure, and have resolved To remain as such; Thats only due!
hmm...rgs .......a new way just loved it ......correlating the reaction between a base metal and acid , then the application of it to a feeling...simply awesome! "Now I lie like sugar crystals dissolved, In water, where others see only you." two great lines...........
Thanks a lot KishoreG, for your appreciation. Happy to receive such a feedback that motivates me further. -rgs
