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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Sep 16, 2014.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    How can you just express
    How much you love someone?
    I tried but landed in a mess.
    I've quit doing this since then.

    Seeing that dense black cloud brought
    The image of your long shining hair.
    I froze then and was lost in thought
    Till I looked up and saw that star.

    Early to come, it lighted the sky
    Just the same way you do to me.
    The joy that it brought now lies
    At top in my moments, you see?

    Then came those fast moving things,
    They could be meteors or planets!
    Zooming in and quickly dispersing,
    They reflected yours truly yet!

    Finally the yellow orb,
    Came, touching all around.
    So lovely and worthy of a rob,
    I felt and jumped in the ground.

    So near, yet so far from me,
    They are like you, you know?
    I've now tried and lies the plea,
    Awaiting you to bring a glow.
     
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    Simple lines yet so much thought process applied in comparing nature to a loved one...
    good one asusual rgs...
     
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    Thanks for your quick like and feedback KishoreG. Just tempted to ask this, seeing your signature - Are you booting yourself [as a system] or booting someone? -rgs
     
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    yh,System registry infected...so rebooting........:) :)
     
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    Just liked the other idea too, you know buddy? It helps, like enjoying that punch on the face of the boss, alas, drawn on a balloon. -rgs
     
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    you are simply super buddy.....such a great company to hangout with.....
     
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    Thanks for that KishoreG. You must have known - I am always seen as a loner, but always like company. -rgs
     
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    :cheers...............................
     

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