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  1. rgsrinivasan

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    I feel blessed to be washed and dried,
    Completely by your gifts of love.
    And have that melancholic feel that lie
    Like a shadow falling on self now.

    Its there with me, I only see!
    Others just wonder what it is,
    That I am suffering from. To be
    Frank, I can't say any of these.

    Like a chalk dipped in ink, I am
    Permeated by you deep within.
    To the others, I do appear calm,
    But an endless storm is wrecking.

    You kill me and give me a new birth
    Through pain and I just smile.
    I am yet to know of my own worth,
    But not doubting it for a while.

    You come as the breeze,
    Give me a brand new life.
    And leave me with such an ease,
    It feels like I've been knifed.

    Your words and presence heal me.
    But I have to really yearn for them.
    I try like those ceaseless waves of sea.
    Why can't you make me hemmed?
     
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  2. kishoreg

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    To the others, I do appear calm,
    But an endless storm is wrecking


    beautiful description of inner storm :)

    Why can't you make me hemmed?
    Because no constraints nor the boundaries can hold back a storm

    Nice one buddy!




     
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    Thanks KishoreG for your appreciation and a quick feedback. One of the basic things that come out is to feel crushed and be within a dear one's grasp of love. Even a stormy one cannot resist it. -rgs
     
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    yh buddy, I do agree...
     
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    Thanks KishoreG, for agreeing to my view. -rgs
     
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    hugsmiley.............
     
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    Smileys say a lot more than what we mean, Kishoreg. At times they may reflect it just right too. This is one such case, I see. Thanks. -rgs
     
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    As I said you are quick.
     
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    :) This, I hope says what I meant. -rgs
     
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    yh I do understand...
     

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